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How likely is interstate war with more than 1,000 battle deaths between the United States and China in the next decade?

How likely is interstate war with more than 1, 000 battle deaths between the United States and China in the next decade? pKbna
The prolonged war between the United States and China has long been a serious tension which impacts economically, politically and sociologically. This essay will particularly draw attention to why there is a high probability of war declaration in the upcoming decade. Several reasons behind this hypothesis include a concern about resource scarcity, diplomatic issues to identify Taiwan and Hong Kong as separated nations as well as As the trend of the global population is increasingly problematic, it is extremely difficult to disregard how infinite supplies are as a comparison to the current demand. At the end of this literature will be a summarised of why I believed so together with certain suggestions to build well-structured responses.
The prolonged war between the United States and China has long been a serious tension which impacts
economically
,
politically
and
sociologically
. This essay will
particularly
draw attention to why there is a high probability of war declaration in the upcoming decade.

Several reasons behind this hypothesis include a concern about resource scarcity, diplomatic issues to identify Taiwan and Hong Kong as separated nations
as well
as

As the trend of the global population is
increasingly
problematic, it is
extremely
difficult to disregard how infinite supplies are as a comparison to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
demand. At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of this literature will be a
Possible spelling mistake. 'summarised' is British English.
summarised
of why I believed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
together with certain suggestions to build well-structured responses.
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IELTS essay How likely is interstate war with more than 1, 000 battle deaths between the United States and China in the next decade?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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