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Some people think that parents should help children with their homework, while other oppose it. Discuss both the views and give your opinion? v.2

Some people think that parents should help children with their homework, while other oppose it. v. 2
It is an undeniable fact that children are overburdened with homework these days, especially in the subcontinent like India. Every parent has their own perspective to deal with this situation, some are lenient, whereas, others are very strict and stick to the rules and regulations of the school. Well, this is not the straight-forward topic and it is obvious to have different opinions. This essay will discuss and analyze both the views and conclude a judgment. To begin with, homework is a necessary evil. Some students enjoy doing it, and for others, it can be a loathe some task. This is to believe that students develop better if you keep them under strict rules and tough circumstances, which keep on challenging their limits. Guardians should not help kids with their homework as it`s the first stair to make them independent. Unrequired support in their assignments can make a student dependent on the knowledge and skills of their parents. Moreover, it will make the next complex and long assignments, even more, harder for students because they never learned and tried to deal with it, in the first place. In addition to this, it will lead to dishonest behavior in adolescents, which can act as a base to mislead them in the future. Unless it`s specified as particularly, one should not provide needless help to a juvenile. Considering the fact that all students can not have the same level of intelligence and grasping power, a little help in such exceptional cases can give a kick-start to complete a terrific long way. Another point, infants in nursery or primary school may require some push, which can enable them. Lastly, some abnormal cases might be needed more surveillance and guidance. To core out, parents should not provide non-essential support to their children with their homework, for the betterment of their future, except some convincing cases.
It is an undeniable fact that children
are overburdened
with
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homework
these days,
especially
in the subcontinent like India. Every parent has
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their
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own
perspective to deal with this situation,
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some
are lenient, whereas, others are
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very
strict and stick to the
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rules
and regulations of the school. Well, this is not the straight-forward topic and it is obvious to have
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different
opinions. This essay will discuss and analyze both the views and conclude a judgment.

To
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begin
with,
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homework
is a necessary evil.
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Some
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students
enjoy doing it, and for others, it can be a loathe
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some
task. This is to believe that
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students
develop better if you
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keep
them under strict
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rules
and tough circumstances, which
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keep
on challenging their limits. Guardians should not
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help
kids with their
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homework
as
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it`s
the
first
stair to
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make
them independent.
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Unrequired
support in their assignments can
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make
a
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student
dependent on the knowledge and
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skills
of their parents.
Moreover
, it will
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make
the
next
complex and long assignments, even more, harder for
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students
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because
they never learned and tried to deal with it, in the
first
place.
In addition
to this, it will lead to dishonest behavior in adolescents, which can act as a base to mislead them in the future. Unless
You used an accent character instead of an apostrophe. Please use either "it's" or "it’s".
it`s
specified as
particularly
, one should not provide needless
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to a juvenile.

Considering the fact that all
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students
can not have the same level of intelligence and grasping power, a
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little
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help
in such exceptional cases can give a kick-
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start
to complete a terrific long way. Another point, infants in nursery or primary school may require
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some
push, which can enable them.
Lastly
,
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some
abnormal cases might
be needed
more surveillance and guidance.

To core out, parents should not provide non-essential support to their children with their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
homework
, for the betterment of their future, except
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
convincing cases.
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9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that parents should help children with their homework, while other oppose it. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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