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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media. BJmd9
Some people believe that newspaper is truest one to knew all the news, other see that website is easier and faster. Despite there are more other resources, but till now many people love it. Firstly, elderly people adored to have paper and read it as usual. Decades before newspaper was the first invention to knew the news after radio, so till now we found many still reading it. In addition, There are some hate e-books. They are want to hold it between their hands and read it. When they were young, they learning reading by it that is why it becomes regular habits. They also convince that it must be true and did not trust websites and found it difficult to use. On the other hand, websites and social media is the other ways to see all the information. It is portable so they can read it at any free time while they are going to work at transportation. Since new generation used phones and electronics when papers start to disappear. They also download books and novels. Several websites were for news which can find easily. For instance, New times website you can reading it everyday through it and they can sent you all the articles via mail. There are option to hear someone read it to, so you do not need to go magazine to bought it nor listen to radio or TV to recognize the news around you. If you hear anyone talk about any topic, it is different you can search it by google and found hundred information. In addition, Wikipedia which helping at researches for students. It is saves papers and help environment when stop using it. To conclude, Technology are essential now days that is why we were read news at it. In my opinion reading books and newspaper is totally different to the internet, while i reading form it you will more concentrate.
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believe that newspaper is
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one to knew all the
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news
,
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other
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see
that
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website
is easier and faster. Despite there are more
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other
resources,
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but
till
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now
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many
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people
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love
it.

Firstly
, elderly
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people
adored to have paper and
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read
it as usual. Decades
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before
newspaper was the
first
invention
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to knew
the
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news
after radio,
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so
till
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now
we found
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many
still
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reading
it.
In addition
, There are
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some
hate e-books. They are want to hold it between their hands and
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read
it. When they were young,
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they learning
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reading
by it
that is
why it becomes regular habits. They
also
convince that it
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must
be true and did not trust websites and found it difficult to
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use
.

On the
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other
hand, websites and social media is the
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other
ways to
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see
all the information. It is portable
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so
they can
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read
it at any free time while they are going to work at transportation. Since
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new
generation
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used
phones and electronics when papers
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start
to disappear. They
also
download books and novels. Several websites were for
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news
which can find
easily
.
For instance
,
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New
times
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website
you can
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reading
it everyday through
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
it and
they can
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sent
you all the articles via mail. There are option to hear someone
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read
it to,
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so
you do not need to go magazine to
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bought
it nor listen to radio or TV to recognize the
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news
around you. If you hear anyone talk about any topic, it is
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different
you can search it by google and found
Use "a hundred" or use a number before 'hundred'.
hundred
information.
In addition
, Wikipedia which helping at researches for students. It is saves papers and
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help
environment when
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stop
using it.

To conclude
, Technology are essential
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now
days
that is
why we were
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read
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news
at it. In my opinion
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reading
books and newspaper is
totally
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different
to the internet, while
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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reading
form
Consider adding a comma here.
it
you will more concentrate.
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IELTS essay Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
5.5
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