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some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. however, others believe that they can get news better through other media. discuss both views and give your opinion?

In the present time, news is vital part of our life and it has many effects on us. Some group of people opion that getting news through news papers is the best way. While, other think option like other media is more effective. However, i take stand with former notion which i explain in further paragraphs. On the one hand, news papers are one of the reliable source of obtaining news since it's begining and for that reason it is preferd by all age group of people. Similarly, the information in news paper is authentic in terms of quality check because many journalist and editiors work on it before printing in newspaper. Which make it more reliable and trust worthy. Not only this but, the pictorial form of presentation make it very clear in first vision to get a basic idea about an artical of news. Futhermore, reading news from the paper have benefits like one can learn new words as well as it create daily habit of reading. On the other hand, other media such as mobile phone or social site is useful for every age. However, the advantage is that, firstly, it time saving and a person can get all the information in tiny screen but only tech savvy has this benefit. Secondly, due to the lots of sources like web site, social media the parameters such as reliability and trust worthyness are lack there. In conclusion, i reiterate my view in which i believe that phone is inevitable nowadays but for getting news; news paper is much better than its rivals.
In the present time,
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news
is vital part of our
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life and
it has
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many
effects on us.
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group of
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people
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opion
that getting
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news
through
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news papers
is the best way.
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While
,
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other
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think
option like
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other
media is more effective.
However
,
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i
take stand with former notion which
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i
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explain
in
further
paragraphs.

On the one hand,
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news papers
are one of the reliable source of obtaining
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news
since it's
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begining
and for that reason it is
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preferd
by all age group of
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people
.
Similarly
, the information in
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news paper
is authentic in terms of quality
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check
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because
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many journalist
and
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editiors
work on it
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before
printing in newspaper. Which
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make
it more reliable and
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trust worthy
. Not
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only
this
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but
, the pictorial form of presentation
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make
it
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very
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clear
in
first
vision to
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get
a basic
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idea
about an
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artical
of
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news
.
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Futhermore
, reading
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news
from the paper have benefits like one can learn
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new
words
as well
as it create daily habit of reading.

On the
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other
hand,
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other
media such as mobile phone or social site is useful for every age.
However
, the advantage is that,
firstly
, it
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time
saving and a person can
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get
all the information in tiny
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screen
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but
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only
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tech savvy
has this benefit.
Secondly
, due to the lots of sources like
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web site
, social media the parameters such as reliability and trust
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worthyness
are lack there.

In conclusion
,
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i
reiterate my view in which
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i
believe that phone is inevitable nowadays
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but
for getting
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news
;
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news paper
is much better than its rivals.
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IELTS essay some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. however, others believe that they can get news better through other media.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
5.5
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