Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited. To what extent do you agree?

The improvement of human society always combine with the trend of the tremendous transformation of genes. Due to the fact people needs various products to establish their daily life in well-being, there is no excuse for us to leave the nature genes exchange behind and it’s not possible to push the trend away. Indeed, the biological engineer is one of the latest careers for the nowdays. Those people concern about the progression while genes has been revealing by the professional in genetic science. The benefits of it not only focusing on a few populations of the modern world, but also for the colossal human races which spread around the earth. Those opponents would not decline the advantage for the human species. On the contrary, the conservatives do not agree the right of genes should be controlled by artificial works. The newest technology would make populations being scared by the approach which could manipulate the nature only in the laboratory. Human nature has been transformed into the protocols and those data’s not easy to be recognized into a practical form could make people who do not master in this field feeling well. As a result, the advant of the technology not always being accepted by the public. However, citizens of the modern world often take those technology into granted without any effort. For those reasons, gene techniques would thrive not matter what attitudes could discuss it.
The improvement of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
human
society always combine with the trend of the tremendous transformation of genes. Due to the fact
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
If ‘people’ is plural here, don’t use the third-person singular verb.
needs
various products to establish their daily life in well-being, there is no excuse for us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
the nature genes exchange
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
behind and
it’s not possible to push the trend away.
Indeed
, the biological engineer is one of the latest careers for the
Possible spelling mistake found.
nowdays
. Those
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
concern about the progression while genes has been revealing by the professional in genetic science. The benefits of it not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
focusing on a few populations of the modern world,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
for the colossal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
human
races which spread around the earth. Those opponents would not decline the advantage for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
human
species.
On the contrary
, the conservatives do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
the right of genes should
be controlled
by artificial works. The newest technology would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
populations
being scared
by the approach which could manipulate the nature
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
in the laboratory.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Human
nature has
been transformed
into the protocols and those data’s not easy to
be recognized
into a practical form could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who do not master in this field feeling well.
As a result
, the
Possible spelling mistake found.
advant
of the technology not
The adverb ‘always’ usually goes after the verb ‘being’.
always being
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
by the public.
However
, citizens of the modern world
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
take
‘Those’ does not seem to match the singular noun ‘technology’. Did you mean “this technology” or “those technologies”?
those technology
into granted without any effort. For those reasons, gene techniques would thrive not matter what attitudes could discuss it.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
235 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts