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Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the styles of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the styles of their own choice. EAJr
Buying a new house is of at most importance to everyone. Some prefer to buy apartment and others go for owing a tenement. People want their own home according to their wishes and needs however every house is governed by local authorities and some areas have more stringent norms regarding its shape and structure. According to me, people should be allowed to build house in their own style followed by some guidelines for safety and peace for overall society. When houses are build according to local authority, they are all same irrespective of the status of person. Moreover, they are designed based on available area and for maximum accommodation capacity. Few are of the opinion that rebuilding the house in same style can make them feel same way as before, with a slight makeover, and re-originate the idea of living. For instance, they can still enjoy partying in backyard in same old fashioned way but with some fancy items and décor. Others for fact feel that rebuilding the house in the styles of their own choice is an upgrade to their lifestyle. Additionally, they are of the opinion that they can redesign family room and bedrooms as per their preference for their ease. For a fact, redesigning the same area will not harm habitat of other people in nearby residence. For example, families who don’t have four wheeler can change garage area into room for indulging more people if number of family members are more. Hence, redesigning the same area and rebuilding the house should be allowed by local authorities to people after providing cans and cant’s, if any, so that peace is maintained. For instance, rules like maintaining 3 meters distance between road lane and house implemented to avoid any form of conflicts can be continued for overall benefit of the society.
Buying a new
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house
is of at most importance to everyone.
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Some
prefer to
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buy
apartment
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and others
go for owing a tenement.
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People
want

their
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own
home according to their wishes and needs
however
every
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house
is governed
by local authorities and
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some
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areas
have more

stringent norms regarding its shape and structure.
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According to me
,
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people
should be
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allowed
to build
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house
in their
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own
style followed by

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some
guidelines for safety and peace for
overall
society.

When
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houses
are build according to local authority, they are all same irrespective of the status of person.
Moreover
, they
are designed
based

on available
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area
and for maximum accommodation capacity. Few are of the opinion that rebuilding the
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house
in same style can
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make
them

feel same way as
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before
, with a slight makeover, and re-originate the
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idea
of living.
For instance
, they can
still
enjoy partying in backyard in

same
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old fashioned
way
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but
with
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some
fancy items and
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décor
.

Others for fact feel that rebuilding the
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house
in the styles of their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
choice is an upgrade to their lifestyle.
Additionally
, they are of the

opinion that they can redesign family room and bedrooms as per their preference for their
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ease
. For a fact, redesigning the same
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area
will not

harm habitat of other
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people
in nearby residence.
For example
, families who don’t have four
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wheeler
can
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change
garage
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area
into room for

indulging more
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people
if number of family members are more.

Hence
, redesigning the same
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area
and rebuilding the
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house
should be
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allowed
by local authorities to
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people
after providing cans and
Did you mean "can't" or "cannot"?
cant
’s, if

any,
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so
that peace
is maintained
.
For instance
,
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rules
like maintaining 3 meters distance between road lane and
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house
implemented to avoid

any form of conflicts can
be continued
for
overall
benefit of the society.
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IELTS essay Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the styles of their own choice.

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  American English
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303 words
6.0
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