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Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the styles of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the styles of their own choice. EAJr

Buying a new house is of at most importance to everyone. Some prefer to buy apartment and others go for owing a tenement. People want their own home according to their wishes and needs however every house is governed by local authorities and some areas have more stringent norms regarding its shape and structure. According to me, people should be allowed to build house in their own style followed by some guidelines for safety and peace for overall society. When houses are build according to local authority, they are all same irrespective of the status of person. Moreover, they are designed based on available area and for maximum accommodation capacity. Few are of the opinion that rebuilding the house in same style can make them feel same way as before, with a slight makeover, and re-originate the idea of living. For instance, they can still enjoy partying in backyard in same old fashioned way but with some fancy items and décor. Others for fact feel that rebuilding the house in the styles of their own choice is an upgrade to their lifestyle. Additionally, they are of the opinion that they can redesign family room and bedrooms as per their preference for their ease. For a fact, redesigning the same area will not harm habitat of other people in nearby residence. For example, families who don’t have four wheeler can change garage area into room for indulging more people if number of family members are more. Hence, redesigning the same area and rebuilding the house should be allowed by local authorities to people after providing cans and cant’s, if any, so that peace is maintained. For instance, rules like maintaining 3 meters distance between road lane and house implemented to avoid any form of conflicts can be continued for overall benefit of the society.

Buying a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 is of at most importance to everyone. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 apartment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:and many more
and others
 go for owing a tenement. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 want

their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 home according to their wishes and needs however
 every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
is governed
 by local authorities and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 have more

stringent norms regarding its shape and structure. This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using "in my opinion" or "I think".In my opinionI think
According to me
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 should be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to build You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 style followed by

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 guidelines for safety and peace for overall
 society.

When You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 are build according to local authority, they are all same irrespective of the status of person. Moreover
, they are designed
 based

on available You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and for maximum accommodation capacity. Few are of the opinion that rebuilding the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 in same style can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them

feel same way as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
, with a slight makeover, and re-originate the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 of living. For instance
, they can still
 enjoy partying in backyard in

same This word is normally spelled with hyphen.old-fashioned
old fashioned
 way This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fancy items and Possible spelling mistake found.decordecoydecors
décor
.

Others for fact feel that rebuilding the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 in the styles of their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 choice is an upgrade to their lifestyle. Additionally
, they are of the

opinion that they can redesign family room and bedrooms as per their preference for their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
. For a fact, redesigning the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 will not

harm habitat of other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in nearby residence. For example
, families who don’t have four Possible agreement error. The noun 'wheeler' seems to be countable, so consider using: "wheelers".wheelers
wheeler
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 garage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 into room for

indulging more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 if number of family members are more.

Hence
, redesigning the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and rebuilding the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 should be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 by local authorities to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 after providing cans and Did you mean "can't" or "cannot"?can'tcannot
cant
’s, if

any, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that peace is maintained
. For instance
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 like maintaining 3 meters distance between road lane and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 implemented to avoid

any form of conflicts can be continued
 for overall
 benefit of the society. 