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Some people argue that meddling to the qualities of food may cause some problems to our health. Conversely, meddling to those is the essential thing that humans must do to increase our life qualities. I entirely advocate the latter, which is likely to be trending recently. It is evident that changing foods provides lots of advances as the result of having better nutritional and flavored nourishments in our lives. In the modern era, the increase in rates of many fatal diseases is due to the appearance of additives foods. Thus, many science experiments appear to figure out the solution, which is modifying and controlling the nutrition on foods. That allows us to prevent our health from being endangered by hazardous sickness as cardiovascular disease. Furthermore, by modifying the nutrition, more and more people are inclined to have grown constitution which is more outstanding than our ancestors. In other words, our health, power bases are now getting better and better. Modifying nutrition is playing a crucial role in protecting humans' health from being hazarded and in improving our health bases through foods. However, regarding foods, we cannot neglect their flavors which is the main reason for eating. We cannot provide our bodies with protein without eating, hence plenty of methods appear to adjust the taste of the food. Would you like to have a chicken meal just only by eating a little candy? Surprisingly, nowadays, we already have some machines which can create a wide range of flavors like chicken, beef steak into little packages. All you must do is sprinkling your candy with those packages' flavor. Furthermore, that seems very normal to many people, but if you are picky eaters, those little flavor packages may become your saviors. For instance, you cannot eat salad because it's tasteless, then you can add some beefsteak flavor to make it easier for you to eat, but the most important thing is you still get enough nutrition from the salad. In conclusion, many people have misunderstood food science that led to prejudice which is not good about food science. Look at the bright sides, the science food contributes to reducing the rates of people who die from cardiovascular sickness. Additionally, the invention of flavor packages is known as the saviors for those who find it hard to eat, to digest the foods.
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problems to our
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do to increase our life qualities. I
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provides lots of advances as the result of having better nutritional and flavored
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nourishments
in our
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lives
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In the modern era, the increase in rates of
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fatal diseases is due to the appearance of additives
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foods
.
Thus
,
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many
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science
experiments appear to figure out the solution, which is modifying and controlling the
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nutrition
on
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foods
. That
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allows
us to
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prevent
our
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from
being endangered
by hazardous sickness as cardiovascular disease.
Furthermore
, by modifying the
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nutrition
, more and more
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people
are inclined
to have grown constitution which is more outstanding than our ancestors.
In other words
, our
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health
, power bases are
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now
getting better and better. Modifying
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nutrition
is playing a crucial role in protecting humans'
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health
from
being hazarded
and in improving our
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health
bases through foods.

However
, regarding
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foods
, we cannot neglect their
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flavors
which is the main reason for eating. We cannot provide our bodies with protein without eating,
hence
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plenty
of methods appear to adjust the taste of the
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food
. Would you like to have a chicken meal
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only
by eating a
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candy?
Surprisingly
, nowadays, we already have
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some
machines which can create a wide range of
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flavors
like chicken, beef steak into
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little
packages. All you
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must
do is sprinkling your candy with those packages'
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flavor
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, that seems
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normal to
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,
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if you are picky eaters, those
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packages may become your saviors.
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it's tasteless, then you can
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add
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beefsteak
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,
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have misunderstood
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food
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science
that led to prejudice which is not
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good
about
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food
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science
. Look at the bright sides, the
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science
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food
contributes to reducing the rates of
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people
who
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die
from cardiovascular sickness.
Additionally
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packages
is known
as the saviors for those who find it
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hard
to eat, to digest the
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foods
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IELTS essay pros of science food in daily basis

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
388 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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