Some people think that money is the best gift teenagers. others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. v.1
Some people think that money is the best gift teenagers. others disagree. v. 1
People often get in a dilemma, when it comes to buying presents for the youth. Due to this, some people think that, instead of giving any other gift money is the best option. While, the other does not agree with this viewpoint. However, I believe that, money is not a better option to give as a gift to teens, because it leads to negative outcomes.
To initiate with people, who consider money as a gift over the others forms of gift because, teenagers can be use money according to their needs without any financial difficulties. Foe example, from gifted money, they can be afforded their high tuition fees as well as another study related things. Not only this, but also it is really difficult situation to buy gift for teens according to their choices. So, despite of come across this type of tricky situations, they prefer to give money.
On the contrary, the latter view suggests that, minors are not mature enough that they can be utilised money with more advantages. To elaborate, teenagers do not know completely the value of money and it is possible that they waste all money in alcohol, drugs and tobacco. Furthermore, the gift is the purest form of way to express our love to them. For example, young people remember all small things, particularly gift matters a lot to them. This, in turn, bloom a feeling of love, care and special in their minds, which is the most important in their age.
To infer and offer my position, I would say that, although money can be fulfilled their financial needs and it is easy to give money without face any confusion while loosing it. Nevertheless, teenage is very sensible age of this age minors need only love, care and they find their happiness from even small gifts.
People
often
get
in a dilemma, when it
comes
to buying presents for the youth. Due to this,
some
people
think
that,
instead
of giving any other
gift
money
is the best option.
While
, the other does not
agree
with this viewpoint.
However
, I believe that,
money
is not a better option to give as a
gift
to teens,
because
it leads to
negative
outcomes.
To initiate with
people
, who consider
money
as a
gift
over the others forms of
gift
because
,
teenagers
can be
use
money
according to their needs without any financial difficulties. Foe example, from gifted
money
, they can
be afforded
their high tuition fees
as well
as another study related things. Not
only
this,
but
also
it is
really
difficult situation to
buy
gift
for teens according to their choices.
So
,
despite of
come
across this type of tricky situations, they prefer to give money.
On the contrary
, the latter view suggests that, minors are not mature
enough
that they can be
utilised
money
with more advantages. To elaborate,
teenagers
do not know completely the value of
money
and it is possible that they waste all
money
in alcohol, drugs and tobacco.
Furthermore
, the
gift
is the purest form of way to express our
love
to them.
For example
, young
people
remember all
small
things,
particularly
gift
matters a lot to them. This, in turn, bloom a feeling of
love
, care and special in their minds, which is the most
important
in their age.
To infer and offer my position, I would say that, although
money
can
be fulfilled
their financial needs and it is easy to give
money
without face any confusion while loosing it.
Nevertheless
, teenage is
very
sensible age of this age minors need
only
love
,
care and
they find their happiness from even
small
gifts
.
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