Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? what other factors contribute towards happiness? v.7
Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? what other factors contribute towards happiness? v. 7
Nowadays, money is vital in all kinds of emergencies. However, a few public considered that happiness cannot be found without money. In my opinion, I think that, people can be happy with some money in life and there are some more factors those contributing towards happiness.
Firstly, I think that people can enjoy the life with a low amount of payment. In other words, low salary, but enough for paying such eating, travelling, health insurance as well as rent is enough to be happy with a short payment. For instance, my neighbour Faruk earns only two thousand dollars per month, but he can save fifty dollars after paying every spending ways. Besides, people can live happier with a short amount of salary by paying some essential ways of life.
On the other hand, there are a lot of ways to get the happiness rather than paying. Therefore, helping other is more valuable. Furthermore, government doctors in villages cannot earn a lot, even if, they are helping the poor people with the helping hands. For example, my relative Dr. Habib, who is a government doctor lives in a small village with a short budget of the bill, moreover, he cannot save anything, but to help the poors with the health service. Also, people can enjoy the career with a shortage budget of salary while they are helping others.
In conclusion, the bill is a way that helps to be happy. Although, I personally think that people can be happy without a lot of bills, because people can be happy with paying some career issues and helping others is another way to be happy.
Nowadays, money is vital in all kinds of emergencies.
However
, a few public considered that happiness cannot
be found
without money. In my opinion, I
think
that,
people
can be
happy
with
some
money in life and there are
some
more factors those contributing towards happiness.
Firstly
, I
think
that
people
can enjoy the life with a low amount of payment. In
other
words, low salary,
but
enough
for
paying
such eating, travelling, health insurance
as well
as rent is
enough
to be
happy
with a short payment.
For instance
, my
neighbour
Faruk
earns
only
two thousand dollars per month,
but
he can save fifty dollars after
paying
every spending
ways
.
Besides
,
people
can
live
happier with a short amount of salary by
paying
some
essential
ways
of life.
On the
other
hand, there are
a lot of
ways
to
get
the happiness
rather
than
paying
.
Therefore
, helping
other
is more valuable.
Furthermore
,
government
doctors in villages cannot earn a lot, even if, they are helping the poor
people
with the helping hands.
For example
, my relative Dr.
Habib
, who is a
government
doctor
lives
in a
small
village with a short budget of the bill,
moreover
, he cannot save anything,
but
to
help
the
poors
with the health service.
Also
,
people
can enjoy the career with a shortage budget of salary while they are helping others.
In conclusion
, the bill is a
way
that
helps
to be
happy
. Although, I
personally
think
that
people
can be
happy
without
a lot of
bills,
because
people
can be
happy
with
paying
some
career issues and helping others is another
way
to be
happy
.
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