Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shop and on public transport. v.3
Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shop and on public transport. v. 3
Nowadays, mobile phones have become an inevitable part of life. Although they have made the communication much easier in each step of our daily life, some people opine that they should be restricted in public places such as libraries, shops and public vehicles. I, totally, support the view and the reasons for this will be discussed below.
Firstly, public places are usually expected to be quiet and peaceful so that they are acceptable to everyone and the uses of mobile phones in such places are likely to disrupt the desirable working environment. For instance, in a library, where people are pondering over the books, the constant mobile ringtones or the phone conversation will be intrusive or irritating.
Secondly, the use of mobile phones for luring activities as facebook chatting, taking pictures, playing games, listening songs and so on can prove to be undesirable in public places. It is quite noticeable that these days, teenagers are taking pictures everywhere, at libraries, trains, buses, roads, hospitals etc which is a matter of annoyance. An example of this is my friend, who once was taking selfies continuously on the train when the passenger beside her got offended. For these reasons, restrictions on mobile phones on public places would prove to be useful in creating a sense of comfort in public.
In a nutshell, although the merits of mobile phones are numerous, it would be a definitely good decision to ban them in public places as it would create a sense of comfort and a harmonious environment for all.
Nowadays, mobile
phones
have become an inevitable part of life. Although they have made the communication much easier in each step of our daily life,
some
people
opine that they should
be restricted
in
public
places
such as libraries, shops and
public
vehicles. I,
totally
, support the view and the reasons for this will
be discussed
below.
Firstly
,
public
places
are
usually
expected
to be quiet and peaceful
so
that they are acceptable to everyone and the
uses
of mobile
phones
in such
places
are likely to disrupt the desirable working environment.
For instance
, in a library, where
people
are pondering over the books, the constant mobile ringtones or the
phone
conversation will be intrusive or irritating.
Secondly
, the
use
of mobile
phones
for luring activities as
facebook
chatting, taking pictures, playing games, listening songs and
so
on can prove to be undesirable in
public
places
. It is quite noticeable that these days,
teenagers
are taking pictures everywhere, at libraries, trains, buses, roads, hospitals etc which is a matter of annoyance. An example of this is my friend, who once was taking selfies
continuously
on the train when the passenger beside her
got
offended. For these reasons, restrictions on mobile
phones
on
public
places
would prove to be useful in creating a sense of comfort in public.
In a nutshell, although the merits of mobile
phones
are numerous, it would be a definitely
good
decision to ban them in
public
places
as it would create a sense of comfort and a harmonious environment for all.
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