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Some people think that maintaining public libraries is a waste of time and money. Since a computer system can do it very well. Do you agree or disagree with the statement ?

Some people think that maintaining public libraries is a waste of time and money. Since a computer system can do it very well. bQPAX
Public library and computre system both are importent in the era. Present generetion computer system is the best then public library and some time computer system is waste of money. In the future public library is best sorce fo knowledge and help full for many students. Local library is gives a many facility. Many time in the public library gives many new books and diffrent subjects and some time public library is waste of time beacause coming and going can be a waste of time. Secound think is that computer system is very help full for like to reading books. Computer system is very costly thne public library. Thise system provide a lake of sorce of books. Present generetion computer is very help full but some time is waste of money then public library.
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IELTS essay Some people think that maintaining public libraries is a waste of time and money. Since a computer system can do it very well.

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