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Some people think that laws change the human behaviour. DO you agree or disagree?

Some people think that laws change the human behaviour. D2jYA
The importance of designing and effective legal system in every country which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is benenifical while others reject this notion. The sustainable influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the above stated position is unboudetly rational this essay will further elaborate the positive effect of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
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IELTS essay Some people think that laws change the human behaviour.

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  American English
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