Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.5
Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. v. 5
Some humans believe that being satisfied with the job you have is more crucial that job security, nevertheless others agree that career fulfilment cannot constantly be expected and having an enduring job is more meaningful.
On one hand, possessing job satisfaction is paramount in order to ensure mental health, as well as, to succeed by doing something with enthusiasm. For example, if time goes by quickly, you are able to feel useful to society by doing something that pleasures and allows you to pay your bills you will keep your mind sane. Moreover, worrying about profession preservation also gives you the extra motivation to elevate your standards not to lose the job you love.
On the other hand, job security is a key factor if someone or something is depending on you and you are in the urgent need for economic stability in your life. For instance, in case of having a family to support or having rent contracts on a house, people in these situations can not afford to lose their jobs, therefore, must priority job security.
In my opinion, having both job satisfaction and job security as well is the ideal situation and I believe it is possible to achieve this connection. It is extremely necessary to find the perfect satisfying job and making the effort not to lose focus in order to get job security. Instead, disliking the job you go to on a daily basis can lead to a mental break down really hard to recover from.
Some
humans believe that
being satisfied
with the
job
you have is more crucial that
job
security
,
nevertheless
others
agree
that career
fulfilment
cannot
constantly
be
expected
and
having
an enduring
job
is more meaningful.
On one hand, possessing
job
satisfaction is paramount in order to ensure mental health,
as well
as, to succeed by doing something with enthusiasm.
For example
, if time goes by
quickly
, you are able to feel useful to society by doing something that pleasures and
allows
you to pay your bills you will
keep
your mind sane.
Moreover
, worrying about profession preservation
also
gives you the extra motivation to elevate your standards not to lose the
job
you
love
.
On the other hand
,
job
security
is a key factor if someone or something
is depending
on you and you are in the urgent need for economic stability in your life.
For instance
, in case of
having
a family to support or
having
rent contracts on a
house
,
people
in these situations can not afford to lose their
jobs
,
therefore
,
must
priority
job
security.
In my opinion,
having
both
job
satisfaction and
job
security
as well
is the ideal situation and I believe it is possible to achieve this connection. It is
extremely
necessary to find the perfect satisfying
job
and making the effort not to lose focus in order to
get
job
security
.
Instead
, disliking the
job
you go to on a daily basis can lead to a mental break down
really
hard
to recover from.
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