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Some people think that it is waste of time for school students to study nature. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is waste of time for school students to study nature. DaQgW
Knowledge of nature which educational institutes gives us, Many individual said this extra topic in pupils life. I don't support this equation because nature's knowledge is very crucial. Multitudes are live on earth because magic of nature. To begin with, Nature plays very essential role in people life. If we will think learning about nature is only useless for us, To elaborate it, If we have no knowledge about about the natural world then we will be feel Illiterate because with the help of nature we have life. But we are not understanding nature. To cite an example, if we think that nature has no any importance then our next generation will don't know the meaning of this word. It is not fine for children bright future. Furthermore, schools should have to conduct single lecture for tell the pupils for this beautiful world, if trainers understand this natural world they provide respect to nature. Mentee feel proud on nature. Thankyou is said to god by children. Schools should have to tell about nature qualities, how we are able to take breath because of oxygen. Learners should have to know about these all miracles which have been done by god. In my opinion, schools should have to use interesting method for telling about nature. In conclusion, everyone wants to know about nature miracles, In my point of view learners should attentive for this natural beauty. Which masses think it has no merits, but I think if it has no benefits then also it has no drawbacks if we acquire a knowledge of nature, It only escalate your understanding.
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which educational institutes gives us,
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said this extra topic in pupils life. I don't support this equation
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nature's
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knowledge
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crucial. Multitudes are
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on earth
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magic of nature.

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plays
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essential role in
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people
life. If we will
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learning about
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nature
is
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useless for us, To elaborate it, If we have no
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knowledge
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the natural world then we will be feel Illiterate
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because
with the
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help
of
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nature
we have life.
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we
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are not understanding
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nature
. To cite an example, if we
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think
that
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nature
has
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no
any importance then our
next
generation will don't know the meaning of this word. It is not fine for children bright future.

Furthermore
, schools should
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have to
conduct single lecture for
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tell
the pupils for this
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beautiful
world, if trainers understand this natural world they provide respect to
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nature
. Mentee
Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "feels".
feel
proud on
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nature
.
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Thankyou
is said
to god by children. Schools should
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have to
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tell
about
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nature
qualities, how we are able to take breath
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of oxygen. Learners should
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have to
know about these all miracles which have
been done
by god. In my opinion, schools should
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have to
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use
interesting method for telling about nature.

In conclusion
, everyone wants to know about
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nature
miracles, In my point of view learners should attentive for this natural beauty. Which masses
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think
it has no merits,
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but
I
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think
if it has no benefits then
also
it has no drawbacks if we acquire a
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knowledge
of
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nature
, It
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only
Did you mean "escalates"?
escalate
your understanding.
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IELTS essay Some people think that it is waste of time for school students to study nature.

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267 words
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