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Online schooling is the way of the future.

Online schooling is the way of the future. AabLX
I strongly agree with the idea that online schooling is the way of the future because technology is rapidly expanding very fast and makes students learn everywhere, not only at school. Nevertheless, in some countries, it is not supported by the Internet in some rural areas, and students in these areas don't have smart phones, notebooks, or computers, which is the point of education and should be rectified by the government. We can assume that in the future, education will be developed for all students in the new generation who emerge from their government, and every country will be wealthy because if the government supported education, like the Internet, those students could reach their full potential. I am hopeful that in the near future, we will see education for online schooling emerge and that it will increase the chances of students who are far from the school.
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countries, it is not supported by the Internet in
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rural areas, and
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students
in these areas don't have smart phones, notebooks, or computers, which is the point of
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education
and should
be rectified
by the
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government
. We can assume that in the future,
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education
will
be developed
for all
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students
in the new generation who emerge from their
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government
, and every country will be wealthy
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because
if the
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supported
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education
, like the Internet, those
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students
could reach their full potential. I am hopeful that in the near future, we will
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see
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education
for online schooling emerge and that it will increase the chances of
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students
who are far from the school.
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IELTS essay Online schooling is the way of the future.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
147 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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