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some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities then to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities then to build more housing. pYrm
We all agree on this occasion that it is more meaningful to plant and grow trees in the metropolitan areas rather than constructing more housing society. Those trees do not only give us oxygen, Shadow, Fresh air, environmental benefits but also give us numerous social and economic benefits and many others. We can also agree that we need housing against the burgeoning population, but we also need forests, gardens, parks etc. but, we can go for multistory apartment buildings and clear areas for growing trees. Sowing trees are more effective and useful to us compared to building houses in cities and towns. Trees help purify the polluted air. It takes carbon dioxide and releases oxygen into the air. For example, recent research shows that a hundred trees can remove tons of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere annually and it adds tons of oxygen, which is essential for the earth's environment. We know that the demand for new houses is increasing these days with the growing population. Due to the fact of these, it becomes essential to build more homes. To explain, we can have that clear space for trees from construction high-rise buildings. It becomes inevitable to build more houses, but we can't ignore the need for a tree for the environment.
We all
agree
on this occasion that it is more meaningful to plant and grow
trees
in the metropolitan areas
rather
than constructing more housing society. Those
trees
do not
only
give us oxygen, Shadow, Fresh air, environmental benefits
but
also
give us numerous social and economic benefits and
many
others.

We can
also
agree
that we need housing against the burgeoning population,
but
we
also
need forests, gardens, parks etc.
but
, we can go for multistory apartment buildings and
clear
areas for growing
trees
. Sowing
trees
are more effective and useful to us compared to building
houses
in cities and towns.
Trees
help
purify the polluted air. It takes carbon dioxide and releases oxygen into the air.
For example
, recent research
shows
that a hundred
trees
can remove tons of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere
annually
and it
adds
tons of oxygen, which is essential for the earth's environment.

We know that the demand for new
houses
is increasing these days with the growing population. Due to the fact of these, it becomes essential to build more homes. To
explain
, we can have that
clear
space for
trees
from construction high-rise buildings. It becomes inevitable to build more
houses
,
but
we can't
ignore
the need for a
tree
for the environment.
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IELTS essay some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities then to build more housing.

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