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Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.2

Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. v. 2
Public speakers such a integral work that will talk face-to-face with the live audiences to explain the phenomena, inspire motivation, even persuade humans to turn over a new leaf. However, to be experts in this field, they are demanding many different special abilities like confidence, adaptation, and determination. The most significant is the confidence that apart from an inheritance, a period time of training would help you get along well with others. When you present confidently your speech, you will be more convincing, hence the listeners can sympathise with your conveyance. As you believe in yourself, you will expert how to control the moment, to rise to the occasion, and to seize the opportunity. The second highest was suggested is adaptation, which plays a vital role in helpful abilities. It was supposed that the public speakers need to be familiar with all the different changeable situations which could be the contrast between their new audiences every night and your viewpoint or the unexpected problems. Moreover, flexible thinkings such as different ways to observe all aspects of the problem in your speech were belongings to adaptive ability. For instance, Mister Rogers is the famous public speakers who were an expert in using his best evidence to cope with any audience, not just children, but all types of generations. The determination is said that the minimum ability to be the profession of this career. It takes considerable effort and time to develop a successful speech in a limited time, so that the speakers could resolve a complicated issue. Not every audience is going to love you or agreeing with you at first, the ability to stick to it without giving up – hang in there – is one of the emotional success factors. When the president candidates persuade the citizens that they would be the most suitable for that position, even though a part of those have objected to, the persistence plays a role to express their characters. In summary, the career of a public speaker is a difficult one, so that in its way certain characteristics are important. There is the consistency of confidence, adaptation and determination are such a good way as to experts in this field. Indeed, the public speakers have not only inspired the value message, shape for the wrong thinking, but also help humans think outside the box, so that the interesting world will be created.
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Public
speakers such
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a
integral work that will talk face-to-face with the
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live
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audiences
to
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explain
the phenomena, inspire motivation, even persuade humans to turn over a new leaf.
However
, to be
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experts
in this field, they are demanding
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many
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different
special
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abilities
like confidence, adaptation, and determination.

The most significant is the confidence that apart from an inheritance, a period time of training would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you
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get
along well with others. When you present
confidently
your speech, you will be more convincing,
hence
the listeners can
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sympathise
with your conveyance. As you believe in yourself, you will
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expert
how to control the moment, to rise to the occasion, and to seize the opportunity.

The second highest
was suggested
is adaptation, which plays a vital role in helpful
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abilities
. It
was supposed
that the
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public
speakers need to be familiar with all the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
changeable situations which could be the contrast between their new
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audiences
every night and your viewpoint or the unexpected problems.
Moreover
, flexible
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thinkings
such as
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different
ways to observe all aspects of the problem in your speech were belongings to adaptive
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ability
.
For instance
, Mister Rogers is the
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famous
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public
speakers who were an
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expert
in using his best evidence to cope with any
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audience
, not
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just
children,
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but
all types of generations.

The determination
is said
that the minimum
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ability
to be the profession of this career. It takes considerable effort and time to develop a successful speech in a limited time,
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so
that the speakers could resolve a complicated issue. Not every
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audience
is going to
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love
you or agreeing with you at
first
, the
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ability
to stick to it without giving up
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–
hang in there
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–
is one of the emotional success factors. When the president candidates persuade the citizens that they would be the most suitable for that position,
even though
a part of those have objected to, the persistence plays a role to express their characters.

In summary, the career of a
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public
speaker is a difficult one,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that in its way certain characteristics are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
. There is the consistency of confidence, adaptation and determination are such a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
way as to
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experts
in this field.
Indeed
, the
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public
speakers have not
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only
inspired the value message, shape for the
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wrong
thinking,
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but
also
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help
humans
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think
outside the box,
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so
that the interesting world will
be created
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
Change your language and you change your thoughts.
Karl Albrecht

IELTS essay Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
399 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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