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The regional development

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The idea that richer states permit more economic activity than poorer states, which have more potential for human capital development, has received growing attention in the context of regional development. In the context of regional development, the idea that richer states permit more economic activity than poorer states, which have more potential for human capital development, has gained traction.
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, which have more potential for human capital
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, has received growing attention in the context of regional
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. In the context of regional
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, the
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permit more economic activity than poorer
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, which have more potential for human capital
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, has gained traction.

IELTS essay The regional development

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
59 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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