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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems.Do you have opinion advantagesand disadvantaves sides of that topic.

Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. Do you have opinion advantagesand disadvantaves sides of that topic. pb7ma
Nowadays some people believe that, it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. Actually, that is right idea. If high school pupils study literature, this is useful for their selves. But some people think, that is wrong way. They calculate it is waste of time. Therefore, parents want to work somewhere and find money. According to the some people read or study literature, it is very useful. Students must read novels and poems in childhood, because they read novels, their speech will be improve or increase and they speak special person they are not worry. In my opinion, studying literature is good. This is improve our speech
Nowadays
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some
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people
believe that, it is a waste of time for high school students to study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
literature
, such as novels and poems.

Actually,
that is
right
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idea
. If high school pupils study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
literature
, this is useful for their selves.
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But
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some
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people
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think
,
that is
Please check whether an article is missing: "a wrong".
wrong
way. They calculate it is waste of time.
Therefore
, parents want to work somewhere and find money.

According to the
Did you mean "same"?
some
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people
read or study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
literature
, it is
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very
useful. Students
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must
read novels and poems in childhood,
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because
they read novels, their speech will be
Consider using the past participle "improved"?
improve
or
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
increase and
they speak special person they are not worry.

In my opinion, studying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
literature
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
. This is
Consider using a past participle here: "improved".
improve
our
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
speech

IELTS essay Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. Do you have opinion advantagesand disadvantaves sides of that topic.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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