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I was born and raised in Thai Nguyen where is famoust for tea. My family is an extended family. There are seven members in my family, my grandmother, my parent, two older sisters, me, and my young brother. We live together in a big house far from the city center. My two sisters are married and have a small family of their own. My parents are farmers, so they work at the farm from morning till afternoon. My grandmother is seventy-eight years old, but she is still strong. When I went to school, Grandma was the one who cooked for all members and cleaned the house. When I come home from school, I help my grandmother prepare food and wait for my parents to come home from work.

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 and raised in Thai Nguyen where is Possible spelling mistake found.famous
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 for tea. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 is an extended You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
. There are seven members in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
, my grandmother, my parent, two older sisters, me, and my young brother. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 together in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
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house
 far from the city center. My two sisters are married
 and have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
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family
 of their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
. My parents are farmers, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they work at the farm from morning till afternoon. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
My
 grandmother is seventy-eight years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 she is still
 strong. When I went to school, Grandma was the one who cooked for all members and cleaned the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 home from school, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 my grandmother prepare food and wait for my parents to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 home from work. 