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Some people think that internet is boon while other think it is curse. Discuss both view before reaching to any conclusion ?

Some people think that internet is boon while other think it is curse. ndGoP
It is often argued that, with the help of internet life is easier than before and it will be developed the future. However, other say internet have worst effect on human life. This is essay will intend to analyse both the view along with my perspective To commence with, internet play and vital role on human life and it is necessary for individuals. To explain it, nowadays internet is used on every department such as railway, hospital, industry and many more. Apart from that, human type growing and developed first due to world wide web. In addition, a lot of student improve your skill as well as increase the knowledge using the internet. Moreover, it is a good platform to earn money and if anybody is active on social media then it has good opportunity to become a famous personality. For example, after the corona situation every person depend on internet and they are doing work at home. According to survey of Google in 2021, internet usage has been increased 28% in the recent year. Moving further, internet has dark side too much because some hackers are hack social media accounts as well as leak the information and due to this individual phase many problems. Moreover, some advertisement for attract the people with attractive offer and they want to click here and fill the personal information. For example, the survey was conducted by Indian Government and found, in 2018 the Twitter account of politicians was hacked and due to this plentiful information was leaked. In conclusion, internet are extremely useful for human life and it help to growing the knowledge, while it has some harmful effect on human life. In my opinion, internet play a crucial role to develop future because learner improve their skill and earn a lot of money.
It is
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often
argued that, with the
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help
of internet
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life
is easier than
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before
and it will
be developed
the future.
However
, other say internet have
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worst
effect on
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human
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. This is essay will intend to
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analyse
both the view along with my perspective

To commence with, internet play and vital role on
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human
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
and it is necessary for individuals. To
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explain
it, nowadays internet is
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used
on every department such as railway, hospital, industry and
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many
more. Apart from that,
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human
type growing and developed
first
due to
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
world wide web
.
In addition
,
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a lot of student
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improve
your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
as well
as increase the knowledge using the internet.
Moreover
, it is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
platform to earn money and if anybody is active on social media then it has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
opportunity to become a
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famous
personality.
For example
, after the corona situation every person depend on
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
internet and
they are doing work at home. According to survey of Google in 2021, internet usage has
been increased
28% in the recent year.

Moving
further
, internet has dark side too much
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because
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some
hackers are hack social media accounts
as well
as leak the information and due to this individual phase
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many
problems.
Moreover
,
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some
advertisement for attract the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
with attractive
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
offer and
they want to click here and fill the personal information.
For example
, the survey
was conducted
by Indian
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Government
and found, in 2018 the Twitter account of politicians
was hacked
and due to this plentiful information
was leaked
.

In conclusion
, internet are
extremely
useful for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
human
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
and it
Did you mean "helps"?
help
to growing the knowledge, while it has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
harmful effect on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
human
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. In my opinion, internet play a crucial role to develop future
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because
learner
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
and earn
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a lot of
money.
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IELTS essay Some people think that internet is boon while other think it is curse.

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301 words
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