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What is your life like now? What do you want your life to be like? How can you achieve the life that you want?

What is your life like now? What do you want your life to be like? How can you achieve the life that you want? e3LDp
I’m a realist and risk-taker. And I realized that the Covid19 pandemic is a suitable opportunity for me to experience some activities that I haven’t tried before. Besides that, I always try hard to reach a perfect version of myself by keeping fit and increasing knowledge. My dream career is Human Resources, which plays an important role in most companies. As I said, I'm a realist so I know what I should do and what I need to do to become a good human resources manager. I spend most of my time for studying and experiencing lots of aspects of this career by joining non-profit and non-governmental organizations. My lifelong ambition is having a lot of money to take care of my family and the one I love. Becoming a successful person and buying whatever I want is my dream life. To reach a goal, I have planned for my future. I have to get my IELTS target band and have the certifications from the social activities and projects which I have joined. Then, I expected that when I am a freshman, I will apply for the companies to practice my skills.
I’m a realist and
risk
-taker. And I realized that the
Covid19
pandemic is a suitable opportunity for me to experience
some
activities that I haven’t tried
before
.
Besides
that, I always try
hard
to reach a perfect version of myself by keeping fit and increasing knowledge. My dream career is Human Resources, which plays an
important
role in most
companies
. As I said, I'm a realist
so
I know what I should do and what I need to do to become a
good
human resources manager. I spend most of my time for studying and experiencing lots of aspects of this career by joining non-profit and non-governmental organizations. My lifelong ambition is having
a lot of
money to take care of my family and the one I
love
. Becoming a successful person and buying whatever I want is my dream life. To reach a goal, I have planned for my future. I
have to
get
my IELTS target band and have the certifications from the social activities and projects which I have
joined
. Then, I
expected
that when I am a freshman, I will apply for the
companies
to practice my
skills
.
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IELTS essay What is your life like now? What do you want your life to be like? How can you achieve the life that you want?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
192 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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