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The given flowchart shows the various stages of paper making process from waste paper. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The given flowchart shows the various stages of paper making process from waste paper. 0M2Wl
The flowchart depicts the different level of recycling process of papers. Overall, it can be seen that the proess is man-made and linear in nature. It starts with collecting waste paper from various sources and ends at prepared paper. There are mainly 8 stages and key stages are baling, pulping and cleaning, de-inking and paper making using machine. First and foremost, collected waste papers from paper bank and other commercial waste paper sold to merchants for bailing. Then after, they carried out those bailed waste papaer to mill, where it will pulped and cleaned their by using various machines in different parts. In very next stage of this process, pulped and cleaned papers needs to go through de-inking plant to seprate inks from paper. There are diffrent plants are available to filter paer from ink. About next level, the row papers send to paper making machine to shape them in proper size. Finally, the finished paper can got from used papers.
The flowchart depicts the
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different
level of recycling process of papers.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the
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proess
is
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man
-made and linear in nature. It
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starts
with collecting
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waste
paper from various sources and ends at prepared paper. There are
mainly
8 stages and key stages are baling, pulping and cleaning,
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de-inking
and paper making using machine.

First
and foremost, collected
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waste
papers from paper bank and other commercial
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waste
paper sold to merchants for bailing. Then after, they carried out those bailed
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waste
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papaer
to mill, where it will
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pulped
and cleaned their by using various machines in
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different
parts.

In
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very
next
stage of this process, pulped and cleaned papers needs to go through
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de-inking
plant to
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seprate
inks from paper. There are
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diffrent
plants are available to filter
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paer
from ink. About
next
level, the row papers
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send
to paper making machine to shape them in proper size.
Finally
, the finished paper can
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got
from
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used
papers.
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IELTS essay The given flowchart shows the various stages of paper making process from waste paper.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
161 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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