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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. EGqM
It is considered by some that we should accept to live with the issue of climate change despite a major threat to life on Earth. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this statement that tackling this environmental problem is postphoned by us. There are some measures which taken by governments and individuals for preventing or mitigating climate change. Proponents of this view believe that governments could enforce laws to lessen air pollution with carbon dioxide. Take, green taxes for example, if drivers have a preference about using cars, buses, they should pay green taxes due to polluting air. It is also believed that renewable energy production is sustainable method in order to tackle this issue. Investing more money to renewable energy sources such as water, sun, wind power is implemented by government. Individuals should take into account of this measures which taken due to stopping carbon emissions rather than ignoring them. If we neglect these measures which mentioned above, this world will be more hazardous for us and our future generation. First and foremost, global warming cause a small rise in the level of the sea, as result of this, flood will be available for our environment. Thus, the majority of people can suffer from property damage by flood and lose their work. I believe that ignoring the main threat like climate change is not alternative to live in an effective way on Earth. In conclusion, it is clear to me that we must address the solution of this global problem, and I disagree with those who argue to find a way to live with it.
It
is considered
by
some
that we should accept to
live
with the issue of climate
change
despite a major threat to life on Earth. In my opinion, I
totally
disagree with this statement that tackling this environmental problem is
postphoned
by us.

There are
some
measures which taken by
governments
and individuals for preventing or mitigating climate
change
. Proponents of this view believe that
governments
could enforce laws to lessen air pollution with carbon dioxide. Take, green taxes
for example
, if drivers have a preference about using cars, buses, they should pay green taxes due to polluting air. It is
also
believed that renewable energy production is sustainable method in order to tackle this issue. Investing more money to renewable energy sources such as water, sun, wind power
is implemented
by
government
. Individuals should take into account of
this
measures which taken due to stopping carbon emissions
rather
than ignoring them.

If we neglect these measures which mentioned above, this world will be more hazardous for us and our future generation.
First
and foremost, global warming cause a
small
rise in the level of the sea, as result of this, flood will be available for our environment.
Thus
, the majority of
people
can suffer from property damage by flood and lose their work. I believe that ignoring the main threat like climate
change
is not alternative to
live
in an effective way
on Earth.

In conclusion
, it is
clear
to me that we
must
address the solution of this global problem, and I disagree with those who argue to find a way to
live
with it.
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
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