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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. kYe0M
Nowadays, we live in a world, where everything needs to gain profits. One of chances for development is hosting an international tournaments. It is discussed if it is beneficial or it has a negative impact on country. Many people are against such proposals. They point out that organising such a big event is connected with big spendings. Not only is government obliged to ensure safety but also many investments need to be done. Therefore, many people disagree with the fact that organisation of such a championship has more positive than negative sides. Apart from that, many citizens claim that we should focus on our local community and support for example poor families. Nevertheless, we should be conscious about the fact that organising such a big championship has many advantages. Firstly, it is an encouragement for foreigners to visit our country, which has a positive impact of country's development. It is common that nowadays more and more people are willing to explore new countries, broaden their minds and visit new places. The more tourists will be, the more profits will enterpreneurs gain from their services. Therefore, organising such a big event could be an opportunity to make our country more popular, to show typical and uncommon places. Tourism is crucial for economy's development, therefore the government should consult if organisation of championship will cause a increase of people's welfare. I am aware of the fact that for many opponents, such an event is a waste of money, but in my opinion organisation of sport event will encourage young people to start doing sport and boost our economy.
Nowadays, we
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in a world, where everything needs to gain profits. One of chances for development is hosting an international
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tournaments
. It
is discussed
if it is beneficial or it has a
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negative
impact on country.

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people
are against such proposals. They point out that
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organising
such a
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big
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event
is connected
with
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big
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spendings
. Not
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is
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government
obliged to ensure safety
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also
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many
investments need to
be done
.
Therefore
,
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many
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people
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disagree with the fact that
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organisation
of such a championship has more
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positive
than
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negative
sides. Apart from that,
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many
citizens claim that we should focus on our local community and support
for example
poor families.

Nevertheless
, we should be conscious about the fact that
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organising
such a
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big
championship has
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many
advantages.
Firstly
, it is an encouragement for foreigners to visit our country, which has a
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positive
impact of country's development. It is common that nowadays more and more
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people
are willing to explore new countries, broaden their minds and visit new places. The more tourists will be, the more profits will
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enterpreneurs
gain from their services.
Therefore
,
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organising
such a
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big
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event
could be an opportunity to
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make
our country more popular, to
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show
typical and uncommon places. Tourism is crucial for economy's development,
therefore
the
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government
should consult if
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organisation
of championship will cause
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a
increase of
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people
's welfare.

I am aware of the fact that for
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many
opponents, such an
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event
is a waste of money,
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but
in my opinion
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organisation
of sport
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event
will encourage young
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people
to
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start
doing sport and boost our economy.
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IELTS essay Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad.

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266 words
6.0
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