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Some people think that healthcare should be free for everyone; other things that people should pay for their medical cost themselves discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is universally acknowledge that, "Health is Wealth". Few groups of people argue that medical treatments must be done without any kind of charge for all while others believe that individuals should done their payment by themselves for their health issues. This essay will discuss both the perspectives in details. There are manifold points to shore up the former view. To begin with, it is indisputable that it is government’s responsibility to make basic health care accessible to everyone. To justify, it is well known that people of any nation pay direct or indirect taxes to its government so they are pretty much entitled to at least get the medical services in return. As a result, a nation is likely to prosper when its residents are owners of good health due to provisions available for their medical care. Moreover, a nation cannot neglect its citizens at any cost in case they are ill and cannot afford to pay for their health care. On the contrary, others have conflicting views. Now there are various reasons to support the latter view. Initially, making free health services available to all would be an extra burden on the authorities. To elaborate, government already has to bear the hefty finances of various sectors such as education, infrastructure and so on, thus, taking the medical responsibility of dwellers can create instability in the nation’s economy. Moreover, it should be an individual’s liability to take care of their advanced health care though basic care can be provided by the authorities as advanced medical and surgical treatments are quite expensive these days. In conclusion, both the views have their own significance. Undeniably, affluent people can meet the expenses incurred due to medical treatments. However, I still believe that there are some strata of society who cannot afford their own health care. Thence, the government should have a system of knowing their financial status and provide free health care to the needy.
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Health is Wealth
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. Few groups of
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argue that
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medical
treatments
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must
be done
without any kind of charge for all while others believe that individuals should
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done
their payment by themselves for their
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health
issues. This essay will discuss both the perspectives in
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details
.

There are manifold points to shore up the former view. To
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begin
with, it is indisputable that it is
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government’s
responsibility to
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make
basic
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health
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care
accessible to everyone. To justify, it is well known that
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people
of any
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nation
pay direct or indirect taxes to its
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government
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so
they are pretty much entitled to at least
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get
the
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medical
services in return.
As a result
, a
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nation
is likely to prosper when its residents are owners of
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good
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health
due to provisions available for their
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medical
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care
.
Moreover
, a
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nation
cannot neglect its citizens at any cost in case they are ill and cannot afford to pay for their
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health
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care
.
On the contrary
, others have conflicting views.

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Now
there are various reasons to support the latter view.
Initially
, making free
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health
services available to all would be an extra burden on the authorities. To elaborate,
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government
already
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has to
bear the hefty finances of various sectors such as education, infrastructure and
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on,
thus
, taking the
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medical
responsibility of dwellers can create instability in the
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nation’s
economy.
Moreover
, it should be an individual’s liability to take
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care
of their advanced
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health
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though basic
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care
can
be provided
by the authorities as advanced
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medical
and surgical treatments are quite expensive these days.

In conclusion
, both the views have their
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own
significance.
Undeniably
, affluent
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people
can
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meet
the expenses incurred due to
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medical
treatments.
However
, I
still
believe that there are
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some
strata of society who cannot afford their
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own
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health
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care
. Thence, the
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government
should have a system of knowing their financial status and provide free
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health
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care
to the needy.
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IELTS essay Some people think that healthcare should be free for everyone; other things that people should pay for their medical cost themselves

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