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Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. d1bE

It is true that there is an concern of dangerous sports which is widespread and draw to public attentions, other people believe that these should be banned, although people must not be underestimate its consequence to individual and communities as a whole. I would argue that they should freedom to participate whatever sports that they engage in. On the one hand, people have several strong reasons to the government must imposed official bans and restricted to dangerous sports. Firstly, due to safety reason, there are many extreme case that recuse member of group have put their threaten-life situation to help people who are addicted and intriguing by dangerous sports.

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 believe that these should be banned
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