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Now a days parents put to much pressure on their children to succeed what is the reason for doing this Is this a positive or negative development?

Now a days parents put to much pressure on their children to succeed what is the reason for doing this Is this a positive or negative development? VNgD
In recent days, parents are forced their children to become successful in life. This essay enlightens about the postive and negative effects of parents are constraining their child for obtaining success. To begin with, there are certain advantages for child when mother and father are forcing to study to ensure favourable results. In recent studies revealed that above 20%of the individuals career goals are succeeding because of force from parents. The main factor to be considered is children be afraid of their parents consequently the score of standardized test gradually inclines in education however this results lifetime success. In contrast, the child attend to classes in regular bases as a result this improves the quality of study, knowledge and exposure to the school environment. On the other hand, there are several disadvantages to above disscused topic. Firstly, the stress of the kid eventually increases due to the pressure from parents moreover, this shows detrimental effects in health such as headache, mental retardation and severe psychological problems this sometimes leads to long term effect of individual. Secondly, some children will lose their interest in education because of this shows negative impact in career. Finally, the child losses the freedom in their life this effects the other skill of child this result failure in proffesion. To conclude, there are highest number of drawbacks than advantages to overcome this the prominent method is parents should encourageand motivate their child rather than pressuring this enhances the successful, satisfactory life and also improves standard of living.
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are forced
their children to become successful in life. This essay enlightens about the
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postive
and
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negative
effects of
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parents
are constraining their
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child
for obtaining success. To
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begin
with, there are certain advantages for
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child
when mother and father are forcing
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to study
to ensure
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favourable
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results
. In recent studies revealed that above 20%of the individuals career goals are succeeding
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because
of force from
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parents
. The main factor to
be considered
is children be afraid of their
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parents
consequently
the score of standardized
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test
gradually
inclines in education
however
this
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results
lifetime success.
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, the
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child
attend to classes in regular bases as a
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result
this
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improves
the quality of study, knowledge and exposure to the school environment.
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, there are several disadvantages to above
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Firstly
, the
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stress
of the kid
eventually
increases due to the pressure from
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parents
moreover
, this
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shows
detrimental effects in health such as headache, mental retardation and severe psychological problems this
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sometimes
leads to long term
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effect
of individual.
Secondly
,
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children will lose their interest in education
because of this
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shows
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negative
impact in career.
Finally
, the
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child
losses the freedom in their life this effects the other
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skill
of
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child
this
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result
failure in
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proffesion
.
To conclude
, there are
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number of drawbacks than advantages to overcome this the prominent method is
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parents
should
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encourageand
motivate their
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child
rather
than pressuring this enhances the successful, satisfactory life and
also
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improves
standard of living.
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IELTS essay Now a days parents put to much pressure on their children to succeed what is the reason for doing this Is this a positive or negative development?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
251 words
5.5
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