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Some people think that good teamwork makes a company successful ,others think that good leadeeship is the reason behind the sucess of a company . Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Human element play relevant role to built up one advance organization. Most of the individuals believe better teamwork is one of the important components of successful business. However, other public say with out leadership company can not be developed. in addition, good leader is one reason which make organization successful. The purpose of this essay wii be compared both opinion and conclude with my perference. To begin with, every one can share there ideas when we will be on teamworked which is completely beneficial for company. Different employees give various views as well as opinions that can be helpfuled to slove plenty of issues of organization. In addition, product of business will be spread over the community deu to the cooperation of staff which are in group. As expected plethara of prospect will be offered to organization by society as the result that, every employ of group give information of company to the public. For example plenty of employees visit community to provide information about organization. Hence, it is better for organization to working on team. One the other hand, one good leader can growth organization smoothly, without leadership company can not be moved on. Furthemore, we need to deal with plenty of costumers which is not possible without chief. Moreover, director should be responsibled of all profit and loss of business. another reason that, all the management of office is completely on the hand of officer. for instance, last year when, i visited one company, i saw that leader is only one who have been managing plenty of issues of company like lost of report, salary of staff and many more. Therefore, without chief business will not be successed. In conclusion, i do believe that both are import for business. however, leadership is more meaningful than working in group.
Human element play relevant role to built up one advance
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organization
. Most of the individuals believe better teamwork is one of the
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important
components of successful
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business
.
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, other public say
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leadership
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company
can not
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in
addition,
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good
leader is one reason which
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make
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organization
successful. The purpose of this essay
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be compared
both opinion and conclude with my
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perference
.

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ideas
when we will be on
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teamworked
which is completely beneficial for
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company
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as opinions that can be
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helpfuled
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slove
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plenty
of issues of
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organization
.
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, product of
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business
will
be spread
over the community
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to the cooperation of staff which are in group. As
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of prospect will
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to
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organization
by society as the result that, every employ of group give information of
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company
to the public.
For example
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plenty
of employees visit community to provide information about
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organization
.
Hence
, it is better for
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organization
to working on team.

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the other hand, one
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good
leader can growth
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organization
smoothly
, without leadership
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company
can not be
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moved
on.
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, we need to deal with
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plenty
of costumers which is not possible without chief.
Moreover
, director should be
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responsibled
of all profit and loss of
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business
.
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another
reason that, all the management of office is completely on the hand of officer.
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for
instance, last year when,
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visited one
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company
,
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i
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saw
that leader is
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one who have been managing
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plenty
of issues of
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company
like lost of report, salary of staff and
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many
more.
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, without chief
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business
will not be
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successed
.

In conclusion
,
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i
do believe that both are import for
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business
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however
, leadership is more meaningful than working in group.
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IELTS essay Some people think that good teamwork makes a company successful, others think that good leadeeship is the reason behind the sucess of a company.

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