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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there ate more important environmental problems

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there ate more important environmental problems YaYQ

Admittedly, it is thought by some that, the major environmental issue which is facing by this era is the extinction of endangered species of plants and animals, but few others contradict the above mentioned argument. It is arguably, there is no exaggeration to say that we live in a era of developments where by the plethora of inventions have profoundly affect our day-to-day life eventhough it is dangerously affect the environment. Hence it is considered as a debatable issue today. The following paragraphs diligently scrutinise both the views and reach at a justifiable opinion of mine.

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where by
 the plethora of inventions have profoundly
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affect
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eventhough
 it is dangerously
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 the environment. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
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today
. The following paragraphs diligently
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 both the views and reach at a justifiable opinion of mine. 