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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there ate more important environmental problems

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there ate more important environmental problems YaYQ
Admittedly, it is thought by some that, the major environmental issue which is facing by this era is the extinction of endangered species of plants and animals, but few others contradict the above mentioned argument. It is arguably, there is no exaggeration to say that we live in a era of developments where by the plethora of inventions have profoundly affect our day-to-day life eventhough it is dangerously affect the environment. Hence it is considered as a debatable issue today. The following paragraphs diligently scrutinise both the views and reach at a justifiable opinion of mine.
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, it is
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that, the major environmental issue which is facing by this era is the extinction of endangered species of plants and animals,
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few others contradict the above mentioned argument. It is
arguably
, there is no exaggeration to say that we
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live
in
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a
era of developments
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where by
the plethora of inventions have
profoundly
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affect
our day-to-day life
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eventhough
it is
dangerously
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affect
the environment.
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Hence
it
is considered
as a debatable issue
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today
. The following paragraphs
diligently
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scrutinise
both the views and reach at a justifiable opinion of mine.

IELTS essay Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there ate more important environmental problems

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  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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