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Some people think that finding a job satisfaction is considered the most important thing for the young generation nowadays. Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

Some people think that finding a job satisfaction is considered the most important thing for the young generation nowadays. with this viewpoint? VBPE3
Nowadays, finding a job satisfaction is thought to be the most important thing for the young generation. I do not agree with this statement, and my view will be explained in this essay. A job satisfaction is known as the feeling of pleasure and achievement when a person experience in their job. Many workplaces or companies want to increase the rate of employees having job satisfaction because of these following reasons. When people have job satisfaction in their work, they tend to have higher productivity, leading to make more profits for the company or the workplace they working. In addition, they become more loyal to their job result in supporting and working hard to achieve any goals their companies propose. For these reasons, many people think a job satisfaction is the most important thing for the young generation. However, I believe there are many things more important than job satisfaction. In the young generation, there are many things they can experience unless finding job satisfaction. This generation is the period for young to experience in differently challenging jobs. These jobs can help the young discover their abilities and potentials. Furthermore, the young are able to learn more skills to solve problems, face with obstacles and endure difficult situations. It’s unable to find a job making people always feel satisfied. In conclusion, although job satisfaction is important for both employers and employees, challenging in differently difficult jobs is more important to build strong capacity for the young generation.
Nowadays, finding a
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satisfaction
is
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thought
to be the most
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important
thing for the
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young
generation. I do not
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agree
with this statement, and my view will be
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explained
in this essay.

A
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is known
as the feeling of pleasure and achievement when a person experience in their
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job
.
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workplaces or
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companies
want to increase the rate of employees having
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job
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satisfaction
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because
of these following reasons. When
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people
have
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job
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satisfaction
in their work, they tend to have higher productivity, leading to
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make
more profits for the
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company
or the workplace
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they working
.
In addition
, they become more loyal to their
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job
result in supporting and working
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hard
to achieve any goals their
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companies
propose. For these reasons,
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many
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people
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think
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job
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is the most
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important
thing for the
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young
generation.
However
, I believe there are
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many
things more
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than
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job
satisfaction.

In the
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young
generation, there are
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many
things they can experience unless finding
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job
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satisfaction
. This generation is the period for
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young
to experience in
differently
challenging
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jobs
. These
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jobs
can
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help
the
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young
discover their abilities and potentials.
Furthermore
, the
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young
are able to learn more
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skills
to solve problems, face with obstacles and endure difficult situations. It’s unable to find a
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job
making
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people
always feel satisfied.

In conclusion
, although
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job
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satisfaction
is
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important
for both employers and employees, challenging in
differently
difficult
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jobs
is more
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important
to build strong capacity for the
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young
generation.
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IELTS essay Some people think that finding a job satisfaction is considered the most important thing for the young generation nowadays. with this viewpoint?

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