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Developed countries should restrict employment from other countries. Do what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Developed countries should restrict skilled employees from underdevelopment countries as the later would require them for their country development. In my opinion, I disagree that, first world countries should allow skilled workers from poor countries as it leverage the economy of both parties. Firstly, rich countries have an abundance of human resource, but skill gaps are prevailed too. It is a general misconception that developed countries have skilled employees for all their demands, but this notion is not correct. For example, in US there are more demands for skilled software developers till date and the country has a standard visa policy in place. Another good reason is that, employment restriction results in bad reputation. If a rich country closed borders then, it’s relationship with other countries is at stake. For example, a poor country is in need of cash inflows and investments for it’s growth which will be possible from their employees who has been employed in the rich countries. So this transaction is not possible if the policies are against their wish. In conclusion, for a balanced economic growth, well flourished countries should allow the employment from under rated countries in order to balance the mutual countries development.

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countries
 should restrict You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadeptexperiencedableproficient
skilled
 employees from underdevelopment You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 as the later would require them for their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 development. In my opinion, I disagree that, first
 world You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadeptexperiencedableproficient
skilled
 workers from poor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 as it leverage the economy of both parties.

Firstly
, rich You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 have an abundance of human resource, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 gaps are prevailed
 too. It is a general misconception that developed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadeptexperiencedableproficient
skilled
 employees for all their demands, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this notion is not correct. For example
, in US there are more demands for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadeptexperiencedableproficient
skilled
 software developers till date and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 has a standard visa policy in place.

Another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 reason is that, employment restriction results in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 reputation. If a rich You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 closed borders then, it’s relationship with other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 is at stake. For example
, a poor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 is in need of cash inflows and investments Did you mean "for its growth"?for its growth
for it’s growth
 which will be possible from their employees who Did you mean "have", "haven"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'employees' should be used.havehaven
has
been employed
 in the rich You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 this transaction is not possible if the policies are against their wish.

In conclusion
, for a balanced economic growth, well flourished You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 the employment from This word is normally spelled as one.underrated
under rated
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 in order to balance the mutual Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "countries'" or "country's"?countries'country's
countries
 development. 