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- Consider whether the driver's excuse is valid. - Consider what influence not eating and drinking has on concentration and safety. - Consider the impact of this crash. - Consider how you would deal with the driver

- Consider whether the driver's excuse is valid. - Consider what influence not eating and drinking has on concentration and safety. - Consider the impact of this crash. - Consider how you would deal with the driver wBMeE

Firstly, In my opinion, I think the driver’s excuse is not valid. I’m a Muslim and I know how fasting feels like, but I think he also knows that he won’t be focused, and he will be tired! In addition, he might kill a soul because of this disrespect, but thanks go the train was empty. Secondly, Fasting can have a range of effects including tiredness, dizziness, dehydration, headache, and a reduction in concentration, prompting safety concerns. Thirdly, The train hit a pylon supporting the overhead power lines. I think those lines are out of action reducing services. What is more, the train was damaged so hardly, so that will cause lots of money. Finally, I think he should get punished, and he needs to have a knowledge about driving while he is fasting because he always carry people with him, so he might kill someone.

Firstly
,

In my opinion, I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 the driver’s excuse is not valid. I’m a Muslim and I know how fasting feels like, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 he also
 knows that he won’t be focused
, and he will be tired
! In addition
, he might kill a soul because of this
 disrespect, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 thanks go the train was empty.

Secondly
,

Fasting can have a range of effects including tiredness, dizziness, dehydration, headache, and a reduction in concentration, prompting safety concerns.

Thirdly
,

The train hit a pylon supporting the overhead power lines. I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 those lines are out of action reducing services. What is more
, the train was damaged
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 hardly, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that will cause lots of money.

Finally
,

I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 he should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 punished, and he needs to have a knowledge about driving while he is fasting This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he always The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "carries", "carried".carriescarried
carry
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 with him, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 he might kill someone. 