Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale whole others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale whole others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. OVy5y
The environmental issues had always been a problem. The people attempted to solve this problem. However, it is still not solved. Several people reckon that the environmental issues must be solved on a global scale. Because according to them, if a country tries to get this subject solved, it is not going to get better, due to other country's air pollution. Their borders are also a problem for that. For instance, if they have a sea border, their sea environment, beaches as well as air could be easily polluted. On the other hand, they believe every country will be safe, while they are working together. They even start a campaign and aim to make it widespread and reach as many people as possible. In my view, it could be a hard process and can take a long time to make every country make the whole world better. Nevertheless, others think that we should do that on our own. For example, if a country has an environmental issue, they ought to make it better by themselves and not only set up new campaigns and get people's attractions but also try to make public health. To provide that, they set up a company and hire both volunteers and workers who are going to be in charge of this. In my opinion, it could be much better, if we would do it, without a doubt, I would work. At least the people could have information about that and they would be more careful and sentimental about their environment. To conclude, the people have always tried to make the environment better and and we should also carry out that and pass it to the next generation. We need to show them how our ancestors and protect our public safety and they have to do that too.
The environmental issues had always been a problem. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
attempted to solve this problem.
However
, it is
still
not solved.

Several
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
reckon that the environmental issues
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be solved
on a global scale.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
according to them, if a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
tries to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
this subject solved, it is not going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
, due to other country's air pollution. Their borders are
also
a problem for that.
For instance
, if they have a sea border, their sea environment, beaches
as well
as air could be
easily
polluted.
On the other hand
, they believe every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
will be safe, while they are working together. They even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
a campaign and aim to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
it widespread and reach as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
as possible. In my view, it could be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
process and can take a long time to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
the whole world better.

Nevertheless
, others
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that we should do that on our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
.
For example
, if a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
has an environmental issue, they ought to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
it
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
by themselves and not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
set up new campaigns and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's attractions
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
try to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
public health. To provide that, they set up a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and hire both volunteers and workers who are going to be in charge of this. In my opinion, it could be much
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
, if we would do it, without a doubt, I would work. At least the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
could have information about
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
that and
they would be more careful and sentimental about their environment.

To conclude
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
have always tried to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
the environment
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
and and
we should
also
carry out that and pass it to the
next
generation. We need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
them how our ancestors and protect our public
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
safety and
they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
do that too.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale whole others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale whole others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.