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Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action.

Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. JE76
The Environment problem is the most argued topic because of the increased global warming over the last decade. On one hand, few people believe that the problem with the environment cannot be handled individually, while others think it cannot be handled with the government alone without a help of an individual taking some action. In my opinion, the key to this solution relies on individuals taking some precautions towards the ecosystem. Firstly, As everyone is aware emissions from car exhausts led to air pollutions. In other words, toxins from car emissions such as Carbon dioxide can cause air pollutions around the cities. Air pollution can be curbed when an individual or person can replace the leaded fuel cars with electric cars. This could reduce the air pollution in the atmosphere and alleviate the air pollution gradually. And the person can easily influence other people to buy electric cars. This is the best example of how an individual can contribute towards solving environmental problems. However, government involvement will come into the picture when it comes to affording electric cars alongside, building electric stations. Secondly, one of the most serious environmental problems is noise pollution which is caused by burning crackers. This not only causes sound pollution it can damage the brain. One can stop using them. If the government can ban the use of crakers, it's ultimately the responsibility of an individual to spread the awareness regarding the same, also educate people how sound and air pollution can damage the ecosystem which can cause an adverse effect on our lives. There are many volunteers who are doing this job of spreading awareness. While celebrating festivals one can stop using crackers instead enjoy the time with family and friends. By taking tiny steps, environmental problems can be reduced. In conclusion, solving the problem of the environment can be done by individuals by taking initiative. The government alone cannot do this.
The Environment
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is the most argued topic
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of the increased global warming over the last decade. On one hand, few
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people
believe that the
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problem
with the environment cannot
be handled
individually
, while others
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think
it cannot
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government
alone without a
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help
of an
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individual
taking
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action. In my opinion, the key to this solution relies on
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individuals
taking
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some
precautions towards the ecosystem.

Firstly
, As everyone is aware emissions from
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car
exhausts led to
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air
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pollutions
.
In other words
,

toxins from
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car
emissions such as Carbon dioxide can cause
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air
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pollutions
around the cities.
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Air
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pollution
can
be curbed
when an
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individual
or person can replace the leaded fuel
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cars
with
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electric
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cars
. This could
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reduce
the
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air
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pollution
in the atmosphere and alleviate the
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air
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pollution
gradually
. And the person can
easily
influence other
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people
to
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buy
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electric
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cars
. This is the best example of how an
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individual
can contribute towards solving environmental
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problems
.
However
,
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government
involvement will
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come
into the picture when it
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comes
to affording
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electric
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alongside, building
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electric
stations.

Secondly
, one of the most serious environmental
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problems
is noise
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pollution
which
is caused
by burning crackers. This not
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only
causes sound
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pollution
it can damage the brain. One can
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stop
using them. If the
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government
can ban the
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use
of
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crakers
, it's
ultimately
the responsibility of an
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individual
to spread the awareness regarding the same,
also
educate
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people
how sound and
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air
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pollution
can damage the ecosystem which can cause an adverse effect on our
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lives
. There are
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many
volunteers who are doing this job of spreading awareness. While celebrating festivals one can
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stop
using crackers
instead
enjoy the time with family and friends.

By taking tiny steps, environmental
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problems
can be
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reduced
.

In conclusion
, solving the
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problem
of the environment can
be done
by
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individuals
by taking initiative. The
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government
alone cannot do this.

IELTS essay Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action.

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