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Some people think that each individual can help to stop climate change but others think that government can do better in this case

Some people think that each individual can help to stop climate change but others think that government can do better in this case 7P53y
Nowadays, thanks to the massive increase in the population of human beings and their facilities, world is suffering from global climate change or global warming which has become a major concern for the current generation. The question is how much each of us can stop this phenomenon. In this case many may say, and I partly agree that our effort will not make a significant difference, if only some people take it into account and government must be involved to reach a good result; on the other hand, others belive that people by themselves can do some good actions to prevent any climate change which may be effective in some cases. In this essay I will discuss both of these views before any conclusion. To begin with, word-wide climate change is the result of our direct or indirect actions; therefore, each person can slow the pace of this phenomenon by observing some rules which probably will be effective; for instance, air pollution is a major factor in climate change which occurs duo to various reasons such as car feuls, factory pollution and green house gas emissions, and humans are involved in causing this pollution, so each individual can help by decrease the usage of private cars for daily transport. On the other hand, the government or major institutions and organization, are usually in charge of power and they can make significant changes if they wish. global warming is not an exception and it can be slowed or prevented by sensible governmental project. More over, governments are reach and they can start some international status to inform people about the consequences of the climate change on their lives through television or internet which will be much effective duo to the fact that numerous people hear their massage. To conclude, each people can influence the climate change in a positive way, hence the result will not be remarkable until the government participate too duo to the fact that they have more power, more money and more professional experts and scientists which can find a efficient solution to prevent the climate change in the future.
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climate
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change
or global warming which has become a major concern for the
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current
generation. The question is how much each of us can
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stop
this phenomenon.
In this case
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many may
say, and I partly
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agree
that our effort will not
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make
a significant difference, if
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only
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some
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people
take it into account and
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government
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must
be involved
to reach a
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good
result;
on the other hand
, others
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belive
that
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people
by themselves can do
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some
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good
actions to
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prevent
any
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climate
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change
which may be effective in
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some
cases. In this essay I will discuss both of these views
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before
any conclusion.

To
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begin
with, word-wide
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climate
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change
is the result of our direct or indirect actions;
therefore
, each person can slow the pace of this phenomenon by observing
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some
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rules
which
probably
will be effective;
for instance
, air pollution is a major factor in
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climate
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change
which occurs duo to various reasons such as car
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feuls
, factory pollution and green
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house
gas emissions, and humans
are involved
in causing this pollution,
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so
each individual can
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help
by decrease the usage of private cars for daily transport.

On the other hand
, the
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government
or major institutions and organization, are
usually
in charge of
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power and
they can
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make
significant
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changes
if they wish.
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global
warming is not an exception and it can
be slowed
or
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prevented
by sensible governmental project. More over,
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governments
are
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reach and
they can
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start
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some
international status to inform
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people
about the consequences of the
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climate
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change
on their
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lives
through television or internet which will be much effective duo to the fact that numerous
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people
hear their massage.

To conclude
, each
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people
can influence the
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climate
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change
in a
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positive
way,
hence
the result will not be remarkable until the
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government
participate too duo to the fact that they have more power, more money and more professional experts and scientists which can find
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a
efficient solution to
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prevent
the
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climate
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change
in the future.
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IELTS essay Some people think that each individual can help to stop climate change but others think that government can do better in this case

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
352 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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