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Some people think that e-books will eventually replace traditional paper-based books. Others, however, believe that both versions will continue side by side. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that e-books will eventually replace traditional paper-based books. Others, however, believe that both versions will continue side by side. 5a7PP
The e-books has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years. While, there are nomerous advantages with the e-books. I personally believe that the benefits of the e-books far outweigh its drawbacks. These are twofold. From my perspective, the e-books are developed from positive side that they are useful. A number of people advocate that it has been significant place in our life. Supporters' are supplied nomerous informations that informed a number of advantages of the e-books. The e-books can replace paper-based books. Given the fact that, if people can not find their illustrators or councels that they can look up e-books in their own phones. After that, people able to find necessary references from the e-books. Following this, a number of people believe that e-books are incredibly useful for humans. Further and even more importantly, though, the negative side of the e-books are always available. A number of people is read a text of the e-books with their own phones. Although, these conditions are extremely unpleasant. Given the fact that, if people read a text with phones that the rays are drop of eyes. That is why, the e-books can not replace paper-based books. Thus far, the e-books are more uncomfortably than real books as well as, they are less read than sample books. The real books are extremely fashionable especially, in the villages. Because, there are not Internet connections for download e-books. The e-books have not entered to all people's life yet. By way of conclusion, hand of the real books are in the sky. I personally believe that the real books are better than e-books.
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from
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positive
side that they are useful. A
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of
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people
advocate that it has been significant place in our life. Supporters'
are supplied
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that informed a
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number
of advantages of the e-books. The e-books can replace paper-based
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books
.
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the fact that, if
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people
can not find their illustrators or
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councels
that they can look up e-books in their
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own
phones. After that,
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people
able to find necessary references from the e-books. Following this, a
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number
of
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people
believe that e-books are
incredibly
useful for humans.
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and even more
importantly
, though, the
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negative
side of the e-books are always available. A
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number
of
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people
is read
a text of the e-books with their
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own
phones.
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Although
, these conditions are
extremely
unpleasant.
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Given
the fact that, if
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people
read a text with phones that the rays are drop of eyes.
That is
why, the e-books can not replace paper-based
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books
.
Thus
far, the e-books are more
uncomfortably
than
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real
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books
as well
as, they are less read than sample
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books
. The
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real
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books
are
extremely
fashionable
especially
, in the villages.
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Because
, there are not Internet connections for download e-books. The e-books have not entered to all
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people
's life
yet
. By way of conclusion, hand of the
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real
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books
are in the sky. I
personally
believe that the
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real
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books
are better than e-books.
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IELTS essay Some people think that e-books will eventually replace traditional paper-based books. Others, however, believe that both versions will continue side by side.

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