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Describe your special ocassion

Describe your special ocassion KljLw

I have had many memorable events in my life but there is one very special occasion that I will never forget which is my first day of school. It was one morning 18 years ago when I was a 6-year-old kid. That day, I got up very early to do personal hygiene and have breakfast. School supplies were bought for me by my mother about a week before and the night before, mother and daughter were ready. I remember it was a cool autumn morning, clear sky, a little sunny

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 special occasion that I will never forget which is my first
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 kid. That day, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
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 early to do personal hygiene and have breakfast. School supplies were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
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, mother and daughter were ready. I remember it was a cool autumn morning, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 sky, a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
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