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Describe your special ocassion

Describe your special ocassion KljLw
I have had many memorable events in my life but there is one very special occasion that I will never forget which is my first day of school. It was one morning 18 years ago when I was a 6-year-old kid. That day, I got up very early to do personal hygiene and have breakfast. School supplies were bought for me by my mother about a week before and the night before, mother and daughter were ready. I remember it was a cool autumn morning, clear sky, a little sunny
I have had
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memorable
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events
in my life
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there is one
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very
special occasion that I will never forget which is my
first
day of school. It was one morning 18 years ago when I was a 6-year-
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kid. That day, I
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got
up
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very
early to do personal hygiene and have breakfast. School supplies were
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bought
for me by my mother about a week
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before
and the night
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before
, mother and daughter were ready. I remember it was a cool autumn morning,
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clear
sky, a
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sunny

IELTS essay Describe your special ocassion

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89 words
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