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Some people think that dividing the housework is extremely important.Discuss this views and give your opinion?

Some people think that dividing the housework is extremely important. Discuss this views and give your opinion? PELQg

People nowadays, especially women, don't have time to complete tasks as society evolves. They not only work full-time, but they also look after their children and do housekeeping. Family members, in my opinion, should share housework. One explanation is that doing housekeeping together can bring family members closer together. Adult members do labor like laundry and cooking, children just do simple chores like watering the garden or making their bed. We feel less exhausted and more equal when we share housework. Another argument is that doing chores teaches children how to organize their belongings. They'll know how to keep their possessions in order and keep everything clean. We will feel accountable for our family if we are addicted. Finally, to improve family life, we should share housework.

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 nowadays, especially
 women, don't have time to complete tasks as society evolves. They not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 work full-time, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they also
 look after their children and The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go housekeeping".go housekeeping
do housekeeping
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
Family
 members, in my opinion, should share housework. One explanation is that The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "going housekeeping".going housekeeping
doing housekeeping
 together can bring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 members closer together. Adult members do labor like laundry and cooking, children This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 do simple chores like watering the garden or making their bed. We feel less exhausted and more equal when we share housework. Another argument is that doing chores teaches children how to organize their belongings. They'll know how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 their possessions in order and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 everything clean. We will feel accountable for our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 if we are addicted
. Finally
, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 life, we should share housework. 