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Government and Society are equally corrupted. Do you agree or disagree. Give reason for your answer.

Government and Society are equally corrupted. Give reason for your answer. jb8AM

In this essay we will go through some pick points on government and society. As we know that government is build up by the peoples votes and as of now every human being seems to choose the wrong party during the voting and then it brings a huge problems in our place of living. Corruption is the key nowadays played by the most of the leaders. The most major problems are roads due to which many accidents are being occured in a town/city/village and due to illetracy there is a growth in crime rates amongst young generation which spoils their future. High taxes which are taken by the government should be used on the public facilities and free education should be provided to the poor people with all necessities. Government is for the people, by the people and to the people. So, society must take the proper decision before voting for their rights.

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