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Some people think that cultural and tradition may destroyed when they are belive it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides. And give your opinion

Some people think that cultural and tradition may destroyed when they are belive it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides. And give your opinion dk287

I, personally said with the latter view. Developing culture tourism is mans of making money from them. therefore, that is main responsibility of authoritys should not be destroyed culture traditions building. For example Tajmahal, Ranki Vav, jaisalmer art etc. Explain for that, world heritage Patan ranki vav sites is old and famous traditional plase in gujarat. different countries tourist visit this place and buys the famous "patolu" of a Patan.

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 said with the latter view. Developing culture tourism is 'mans' refers to the verb 'man' meaning take command of something. Did you mean "men" or "man's"?menman's
mans
 of making money from them. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTherefore
therefore
, that is
 main responsibility of Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "authorities", the plural form of the noun 'authority'?authoritiesauthority
authoritys
 should not be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 culture traditions building. For example
Possible spelling mistake found.Taj Mahal
Tajmahal
, Possible spelling mistake found.RankRanksRankinRandiRank iRanku
Ranki
Possible spelling mistake found.VanVeinVarVeilVAXVat
Vav
, Possible spelling mistake found.jailerjaywalker
jaisalmer
 art etc. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
Explain
 for that, world heritage Possible spelling mistake found.PaganSatanPatnaPaeanPa tanPat an
Patan
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ranki
Possible spelling mistake found.vanveinvarveilVAXvat
vav
 sites is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 traditional Possible spelling mistake found.placepleasephaseplaneplatelase
plase
 in Possible spelling mistake found.GujaratGujarati
gujarat
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDifferent
different
 countries tourist visit this place and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchases
buys
 the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
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patolu
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 of a Possible spelling mistake found.PaganSatanPatnaPaeanPa tanPat an
Patan
. 