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People buy only those which meets the requirements.

People buy only those which meets the requirements. ENbrQ
In the cutting edge era, every person has a hectic schedule; as a result, do not have time to buy the things in order to save time they watch the commercials to buy product. It is claimed by the certain section of society that, individuals buy only those things which they are in need and fulfill the requirements, thus advertisements does not play any role in life and it just becomes the mode of entertainment; moreover, I completely agree with this notion because of low income and improper information about the product, these viewpoints are explained in the forthcoming paragraph of this essay. To commence with, there are numerous reasons to support the statement and the predominant one is less salary. To elaborate, getting a job with proper salary is quite difficult in contemporary world; as a result, people have to work in the jobs which give low rumneration. Because of less income people people does not become spendthrift, they only buy the things which they are in need. For instance, a headline of newspaper Times of India revealed that, about 80% of population only bought the things which they require. Thus, advertisements does not play any role in people's life. Furthermore, another reason is wrong information of the product. To explicate, the quality of the brand shown on the Tv, internet is not similar to the actual product, tey show the fake product. People do not like to buy the products as the product is not genuine. For example, survey was conducted by the Wharton Business School and revealed that, 20% of individuals do not buy the products on looking in the public notices. Henceforth, these public notices are nothing for the individuals, they just become the mode of entertainment. In conclusion, owing to low rumneration and fake information of the product. I am convinced that the statement is logically sound.
In the cutting edge era, every person has a hectic schedule;
as a result
, do not have time to
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buy
the things in order to save time they
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watch
the commercials to
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buy
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product
. It
is claimed
by the certain section of society that, individuals
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buy
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only
those things which they are in need and fulfill the requirements,
thus
advertisements does not play any role in life and it
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just
becomes the mode of entertainment;
moreover
, I completely
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agree
with this notion
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because
of low income and improper information about the
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product
, these viewpoints are
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explained
in the forthcoming paragraph of this essay.

To commence with, there are numerous reasons to support the statement and the predominant one is less salary. To elaborate, getting a job with proper salary is quite difficult in contemporary world;
as a result
,
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people
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have to
work in the jobs which give low
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rumneration
.
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Because
of less income
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people
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people
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does
not become spendthrift, they
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only
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buy
the things which they are in need.
For instance
, a headline of newspaper Times of India revealed that, about 80% of population
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only
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bought
the things which they require.
Thus
, advertisements does not play any role in
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people
's life.

Furthermore
, another reason is
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wrong
information of the
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product
. To explicate, the quality of the brand shown on the
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Tv
, internet is not similar to the actual
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product
,
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tey
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show
the fake
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product
.
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People
do not like to
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buy
the
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products
as the
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product
is not genuine.
For example
, survey
was conducted
by the Wharton Business School and revealed that, 20% of individuals do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
on looking in the public notices. Henceforth, these public notices are nothing for the individuals, they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
become the mode of entertainment.

In conclusion
, owing to low
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rumneration
and fake information of the
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product
. I
am convinced
that the statement is
logically
sound.
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IELTS essay People buy only those which meets the requirements.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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