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Some people think that cooking should be taught as a subject in schools others do not support this point of view.Discuss both views and give your opinion. Write atleast 250 words.

Some people think that cooking should be taught as a subject in schools others do not support this point of view. Write atleast 250 words. Wm95D
It is always an issue of debate that whether the cooking subject should be added in schools or not, most of the people are against of this point of view where as same ponder it should be done This essay will intend to analyse both the views along with my perspective which relates to farmer statment as teaching cooking in educational institutions could be hazardousTaitiating with the farmer perspective that is practising cooking in schools could be dangerous as it involves the risk of working with fire, knife, hot water and hot utensils. Moreover, students are not mature enough to deal with kitchen equipments. To ate an example, Tn Delhi a renowned school added cooking as a optional subject and last year a news was reported from that institute, a children forgotten to turn off the burner which consequently leads to massive explosion. Hence, it is not safe to taught cooking in schools, even I agree with this notion due to same reason. On the contrary, there is another school of thought which states that introducing this subject will assist students to develop their culinary skills as well make them independent. Furthermore, nowadays mostly youngsters prefer to live separate from their parents because of numerous reasons, so learning cooking in school will certainly help them in their future. To exemplify, a recently a survey was conducted by higher authority in which it was found that 80% youth face issue of cooking food who reside far away form their home and family. Therefore, knowledge of how to cook food will assist children in their future. To conclude, nodoubt adding cooking as a subject in institutions is quite risky but if it will done with precautions and responsibility, it would be helpful in long term for children.
It is always an issue of debate that whether the cooking
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subject
should be
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added
in
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schools
or not, most of the
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people
are against of this point of view
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where as
same ponder it should
be done
This essay will intend to
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analyse
both the views along with my perspective which relates to farmer
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statment
as teaching cooking in educational institutions could be
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hazardousTaitiating
with the farmer perspective
that is
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practising
cooking in
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schools
could be
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dangerous
as it involves the
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risk
of working with fire, knife, hot water and hot utensils.
Moreover
, students are not mature
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enough
to deal with kitchen equipments.
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an example, Tn Delhi a renowned
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school
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added
cooking as
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a
optional
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subject
and last year
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a news
was reported
from that institute,
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a children
forgotten to turn off the burner which
consequently
leads to massive explosion.
Hence
, it is not safe to taught cooking in
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schools
, even I
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agree
with this notion due to same reason.
On the contrary
, there is another
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school
of
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thought
which states that introducing this
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subject
will assist students to develop their culinary
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skills
as well
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make
them independent.
Furthermore
, nowadays
mostly
youngsters prefer to
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live
separate from their parents
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because
of numerous reasons,
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so
learning cooking in
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school
will
certainly
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help
them in their future. To exemplify, a recently a survey
was conducted
by higher authority in which it
was found
that 80% youth face issue of cooking food who reside far away form their home and family.
Therefore
, knowledge of how to cook food will assist children in their future.
To conclude
,
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nodoubt
adding cooking as a
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subject
in institutions is quite risky
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but
if it will
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done
with precautions and responsibility, it would be helpful in long term for children.
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IELTS essay Some people think that cooking should be taught as a subject in schools others do not support this point of view. Write atleast 250 words.

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