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Some people think that companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work.

Some people think that companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work. 0nGk3
Some people think that companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work. This opinion, like every other one, has it’s advantages and disadvantages. For instance, a person wants to get information about goods from a shop worker, but store is crouded and he/she cannot find anyone to ask. Uniforms help people to know who is in a working stuff and who is not. When I was 10 years old I got lost in a mall. Thankfully, I saw one guy through the croud with a red uniform and I asked him for help. On the other hand, demands like that can rise negetivity in stuff. All of us wants to wear what we want and often company choses bright and funny uniforms for workers which they refuse to wear. In conclusion, I would like to admit that such events have good and bad sides and companies should work on this subject, including employees interests.
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from a shop worker,
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to know who is in a working stuff and who is not.
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IELTS essay Some people think that companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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