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In many countries, although people work hard throughout their life, they still do not have enough money to live comfortably in their retirement. Identify some causes of this retirement problem and suggest possible solutions

In many countries, although people work hard throughout their life, they still do not have enough money to live comfortably in their retirement. Identify some causes of this retirement problem and suggest possible solutions bbwJW

Some people believe that if you works as hard as you can, and you really sacrifice to be the best that you can be, you will still never have what it takes to make the big leagus. This problem has several causes, to solve this stereotype, we must find the reason for this opinion. First of all, we all used to think if you work hard then accordingly we will live in prosperity. facing people who reach the retirement age is the rising life expectancy.

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