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Some people think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that there are some businesses that depend upon the climate and because of this it sometimes negatively affect them whereas some believe that this is an opportunity to open a new business. People accept different businesses with different weather conditions and I strongly believe that this is a chance to experiment or to settle for a new profession. Prior to my opinion, both views are discussed in ensuring paragraphs. There are ample reasons in support of my viewpoint. To initiate with, the youth of today's generation does not stick to one profession or one business only and they always want to change and experiment some new careers. Secondly, people change the way they dress according to the extreme weather conditions during winters and summer season. For instance, folks wear shorts and loose clothes like t-shirts in summer likewise they wear jackets and hoodies or coats in winters. Thirdly, business like selling air conditioner rises in demand in extremely hot weather situations while heaters are used by people in rigorous cold situations. On the contrary, some businesses like travel agencies do not have any work during monsoon and winters because of risk factors like accidents due to foggy weather and the possibility of floods. Moreover, industries that produce raincoats and covers also get negatively affected as this season appears for only two months of the whole year. Besides this, there are some businesses or professions which are evergreens like hospitals and tech-savvy businesses who are in demand the whole year and gain maximum profits. To recapitulate, although climate change reforms negatively affect the occupation of many people, there are some positive sides as they can open other businesses according to the weather conditions. The younger generation does not like to stick to one business so this is the opportunity they get because of the climate conditions.
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's generation does not stick to one profession or one
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new careers.
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the way they dress according to the extreme
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weather
conditions during winters and summer season.
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, folks wear shorts and loose clothes like t-shirts in summer
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they wear jackets and hoodies or coats in winters.
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like selling air conditioner rises in demand in
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situations while heaters are
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in rigorous
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situations.

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like travel agencies do not have any work during monsoon and winters
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factors like accidents due to foggy
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and the possibility of floods.
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negatively
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or professions which are evergreens like hospitals and tech-savvy
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who are in demand the whole year and gain maximum profits.

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, there are
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conditions. The younger generation does not like to stick to one
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IELTS essay Some people think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
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