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Some people think that children should attend extra classes after school while others disagree

Some people think that children should attend extra classes after school while others disagree gxM5a

Few people thibk extra classes is more important than playing. . But some think that outdoor activities are more useful for them. . So in my point of view, outdoor activities are more important than extra classes. . Because our mind also need some relaxation and confidence. Students attende their school and than after came back to school they again take extra classes so their mind is only think about studies and some time our mind get bored of studies and want some fun and relaxation so i think outdoor activities are important to us

Few This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
Possible spelling mistake found.thinkthick
thibk
 extra classes is more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 than playing. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that outdoor activities are more useful for them. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 in my point of view, outdoor activities are more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 than extra classes. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 our mind also
 need This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 relaxation and confidence. Students Possible spelling mistake found.attendedattendattendsattendeeattenderattend e
attende
 their school and Did you mean "then"?then
than
 after came back to school they again take extra classes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 their mind is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about studies and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time our mind This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
In standard English it's more accepted to use "bored with" or "bored by".bored withbored by
bored of
 studies and want This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fun and relaxation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 outdoor activities are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphus.us!us?us:us,us;
us