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Some people think that checking economy is the best way to know country's success, while people believe that there are other factors to know success of country. What are the factors? Which factor is best?

Some people think that checking economy is the best way to know country's success, while people believe that there are other factors to know success of country. What are the factors? Which factor is best? p1epm
It is an undeniable truth that nowadays almost every nation in the world are making progress significantly at several level. However, it is deemed by some individuals that the economy is the only way through which we can calculate the country's economy, whereas other believe that there are numerous factors to calculate it. I shall discuss some other factors and show the major factor in the following paragraphs. The first and foremost factor, which can not be avoided, is that people should have basic ammunities in successful nation like the education facility, the library, the transportation and so on. To elaborate it, undoubtedly nation's economy is high as compared to other nation but if people do not get enough basic facilities then the country is not successful. To epitome, Bangladesh's is strong country in terms of economy but people can not progress easily due to lack of schools, colleges and so on. Secondly, as far as any country's success is concerned, we should also consider the capital market while calculating success because if international people invest more money in other nation's market, it is called unsuccessful country even though its economy is better. For instance, around 51% of the Chinese companies' sher is bought by the USA. In my perception, no doubt there are plenty of factors to calculate the success rate of the country. But, the most important factor is none another but also general facilities in the country. Because, getting these kind of ammunities is the right of people and without them making progress in life is not easy. In conclusion, we can use a number of ways to measure any nation's success because checking its economy is not only better way.
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significantly
at several level.
However
, it
is deemed
by
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some
individuals that the
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economy
is the
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only
way through which we can calculate the country's
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economy
, whereas
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other
believe that there are numerous
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factors
to calculate it. I shall discuss
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some
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other
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factors
and
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show
the major
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factor
in the following paragraphs.

The
first
and foremost
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factor
, which can not
be avoided
, is that
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people
should have basic
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ammunities
in successful nation like the education facility, the library, the transportation and
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so
on. To elaborate it,
undoubtedly
nation's
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economy
is high as compared to
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other
nation
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but
if
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people
do not
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get
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enough
basic facilities then the
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country
is not successful. To epitome, Bangladesh's is strong
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country
in terms of
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economy
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but
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people
can not progress
easily
due to lack of schools, colleges and
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so
on.
Secondly
, as far as any country's
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success
is concerned
, we should
also
consider the capital market while calculating
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success
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because
if international
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people
invest more money in
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other
nation's market, it
is called
unsuccessful
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country
even though
its
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economy
is better.
For instance
, around 51% of the Chinese
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companies
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by the USA.

In my perception, no doubt there are
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of
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factors
to calculate the
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success
rate of the
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country
.
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, the most
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important
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is none another
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also
general facilities in the
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country
.
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these kind
of
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ammunities
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people
and without them making progress in life is not easy.

In conclusion
, we can
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use
a number of ways to measure any nation's
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success
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because
checking its
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economy
is not
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only
better way.
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IELTS essay Some people think that checking economy is the best way to know country's success, while people believe that there are other factors to know success of country. What are the factors? Which factor is best?

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