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describe a memorable period or event from your childhood

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I remember when I was six years old and, My mother was pregnant with my sister. At that time I was delighted to have a baby sister because I thought she would never grow up and, always remain a baby so I can play with her as a doll. when she was born I was jealous of her as the same as my peer because I thought now everybody pays attention to her. she tended to cry when she was hungry or sleepy or anything else, At that time I understood what occurs to me. I felt self-conscious when everybody focuses on how I behave with her. Otherwise, her birth helped me make the transition to independent living. Actually, I understood babies would grow up in any case.
I remember when I was six years
old
and, My mother was pregnant with my sister. At that time I
was delighted
to have a baby sister
because
I
thought
she would never grow up and, always remain a baby
so
I can play with her as a doll.
when
she
was born
I was jealous of her as the same as my peer
because
I
thought
now
everybody pays attention to her.
she
tended to cry when she was hungry or sleepy or anything else, At that time I understood what occurs to me. I felt self-conscious when everybody focuses on how I behave with her.
Otherwise
, her birth
helped
me
make
the transition to independent living. Actually, I understood babies would grow up in any case.
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IELTS essay describe a memorable period or event from your childhood

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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