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describe a memorable period or event from your childhood

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I remember when I was six years old and, My mother was pregnant with my sister. At that time I was delighted to have a baby sister because I thought she would never grow up and, always remain a baby so I can play with her as a doll. when she was born I was jealous of her as the same as my peer because I thought now everybody pays attention to her. she tended to cry when she was hungry or sleepy or anything else, At that time I understood what occurs to me. I felt self-conscious when everybody focuses on how I behave with her. Otherwise, her birth helped me make the transition to independent living. Actually, I understood babies would grow up in any case.

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 and, My mother was pregnant with my sister. At that time I was delighted
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 she would never grow up and, always remain a baby This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 she was born
 I was jealous of her as the same as my peer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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thought
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 everybody pays attention to her. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterShe
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 tended to cry when she was hungry or sleepy or anything else, At that time I understood what occurs to me. I felt self-conscious when everybody focuses on how I behave with her. Otherwise
, her birth This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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 the transition to independent living. Actually, I understood babies would grow up in any case. 