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Some people think that boys and girls should attend school together. Others feel that they should be educated separately. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In this concurrent era, single sex educations disperse across the education world. While some individual believe that students should study in gender specific schools. I side with those who feel that co-educational schools bring more benefits. On the one hand, it could be argued that the boys and girls schools ought to separate. Those who claim that the single sex education is unhealthy in terms of children’s social development because they could not developed the communication skills, and behaviours with different genders. What is more, they also argue that same genders schools, being only around same genders can lead to cattiness among groups and sometimes bullying in some cases.

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skills
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